 Tikkuy 2007-06-23 . chapter 1Cute fic! Wish there was more Gippalia...But keep it up! I'm planning on writing my own soon. |
 The RyRy 2007-06-09 . chapter 1I love it. The little kiss on the cheek is so romantic, but somehow it's so them.
What I don't get is the plural "interests". Shouldn't it just be singular?
Sometimes, your sentences run on a little too long, and it's like my eyes skip words when trying to read them. Slow down and break things up a bit and it'll be fine.
Otherwise -- yay Gippalai. |
 Renn 2006-02-21 . chapter 1Wai!! Loved it to death! I feel you've captured them both perfectly!! Would SO love to read more!!^^ |
 kasugai gummie 2005-12-28 . chapter 1Oh... ;_; I've missed Gippalai. Didn't know how much non-rival slash I was missing out on. This was a simple piece, very straightfoward and sweet til the end. The softness? No, not quite. I guess "understanding" better encompasses what you've portrayed here.
Either way, Gippal and Baralai's relationship is SUCH a drastic change in the ** I've been reading lately, and frankly? I needed it: a break from the crack. (What is happening to the world? XD;;)
Love you fiance-dear ::blows kisses:: |
 Macabre Puppet 2005-12-22 . chapter 1That was really cute. I'll definitely be looking out for more. |
 Baralai's Chains 2005-12-05 . chapter 1 Such a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing that with us!
I love how you depicted both personalities so well and yet so innocently. I loved it. There friendship was portrayed well and so was theri underlying love. Great fic! Love to see more from you. |