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| Tikkuy 2007-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseCute fic! Wish there was more Gippalia...But keep it up! I'm planning on writing my own soon. |
| The RyRy 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseI love it. The little kiss on the cheek is so romantic, but somehow it's so them. What I don't get is the plural "interests". Shouldn't it just be singular? Sometimes, your sentences run on a little too long, and it's like my eyes skip words when trying to read them. Slow down and break things up a bit and it'll be fine. Otherwise -- yay Gippalai. |
| Renn 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abuseWai!! Loved it to death! I feel you've captured them both perfectly!! Would SO love to read more!!^^ |
| kasugai gummie 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseOh... ;_; I've missed Gippalai. Didn't know how much non-rival slash I was missing out on. This was a simple piece, very straightfoward and sweet til the end. The softness? No, not quite. I guess "understanding" better encompasses what you've portrayed here. Either way, Gippal and Baralai's relationship is SUCH a drastic change in the ** I've been reading lately, and frankly? I needed it: a break from the crack. (What is happening to the world? XD;;) Love you fiance-dear ::blows kisses:: |
| Macabre Puppet 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute. I'll definitely be looking out for more. |
| Baralai's Chains 2005-12-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseSuch a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing that with us! I love how you depicted both personalities so well and yet so innocently. I loved it. There friendship was portrayed well and so was theri underlying love. Great fic! Love to see more from you. |