You bash those who you don't like, do you? But I'm pleased that you brought back Molly in good grace. Or at least made Harry tolerate her. Letting her deal with Penny is great, shows that Molly might be gentle but that somewhere deep inside of her slumbers a monstermotherhen :D

I'm a bit miffed at your treatment of Severus, but then he's one of my favourite chars.

There is one point I wonder about. After Bill (?) fought the dementors you made Molly get angry at Harry and say some really unforgivable stuff to Harry. Why didn't this happen again once she learned that one of the twins died? It puzzles me a bit. Maybe I'll find the reason for this later in the story.

Still reading :). But from what I can see your Harry is becoming a Super-Power Harry. Didn't you say that he won't go down that road.

A few minor grammars errors and the long paragraphs are tedious to read.

Oh dear. Your Harry has to be careful to learn to not being so self-righteous. Anger at people is understandable, but that doesn't give him the right to treat people so badly. Pity, really. Because so far I liked the story.

It's also disturbing how fast he's willing to sign away his life, even though Susan seems to be a nice young lady. Bit unreal, that's what it is.

I hope to see more of the other students, more interaction in Grimmauld place between all the people who currently live there.

I really love what you did with Percy, that you allowed him to die as a hero - I hope I judged the signs right. If not, then :(

Great and hard story, where war wreck lives and destroy most people taking part in it resulting in no real winners as all modern wars even the ones against terrorists.

Thanks for the story

I have just finished reading you're story in a matter of days, and I am quite certain you are easily the greatest fanfiction writer I ever ever read or heard of. Never before has a fanfiction surpassed the original story, but here you did just that. This story was easily as good if not better that Harry Potter. So many things were so original and incredible that I can not even begin to descibe.
Needless to say, that was one hell of a cliff hanger. Voldimort still alive, another war on the horizon, I can't wait. As to the 19 years later, it is you're story, and I would never make demands after such a masterfully written novel,(Yes novel, this story goes well beyond fanfiction. This is a story onto itself!)However, I hope you are not offended if I make a suggestion. If you do make another story years later, do still have Harry a major player. I just think it would be a shame to see his incredible put to waist.
But I digress. You're story is truly amazing, and I am only sorry I never read it sooner. I do not say this often, since I have been reading a book a week for over 15 years and have literally read thousands of books, but you're story has earned my utmost respect. May you're words never stories never be forgotten!

WHOLLY ** **! THIS STORY IS THE BEST THING EVER I HAVE EVER READ! THIS IS EVEN BETTER THAN THE ORIGINAL HARRY POTTER!
I have been reading fanfiction for years, and believe me when I say I have read hundreds of them, maybe even thousands. (Growing up all my mom would let me do to past the time was read. Because of that I can polish 20 chapters off a weekend.) And I can say this is the best fanfiction I ever have read! Period! I LOVE THIS STORY!
You have come up with something un heard of. You took a fan fiction and turned in into an ACTUAL STORY! This story is completely unlike any other Harry Potter Fanfics out there, and believe me, I have read LOTS of them. This story has so many fresh and unique ideas I can't begin to list them. All I can say is that I only periodically write reviews because I can't stop reading. Know that I started reading this story only a fe days ago, and I have read 33 chapters on top of illness college, homework, tests, essays and more. All I can say is if anyone degrades you're story, let me know and I'll gladly give them a piece of my mind!

WHOLLY **! That is all that comes to mind when I read this story. As in wholly **, how can some one write a story this good! I LOVE THIS STORY! It is one of the best Harry
Potter Fanfiction, and I have read a LOT of Harry Potter fanfic!

Good story.
So glad I read one of your other stories first though - your Betas for them are worth their weight in gold. This one was so much harder to read with all the poor spelling and punctuation. Had I read this one first, I may not have read any further - and your others are brilliant.
Still... this story was worth the read.

Your question about fawkes helping harry in other stories. Personally, in all the stories ive read where fawkes turns on albus, its because he is acting like a dark lord more than a leader of the light. For example, manipulating harry into being his little puppet with varying degrees of evil intentions from creating a martyr to die killing voldemort, or to create a figurehead to act as a banner to draw everyone under his control while he robs harry blind.

You are doing it differently so far as I can tell. Harry and dumbledoore just have two different visions on what needs to be done and how. Albus isnt being a creepy dark lord puppetmaster, he is trying to lead the light to victory and harry is trying to live his own life by his terms. Good story so far, btw. Itll take me awhile to get through it all. :p

Chilling. Br.

oh my...one of the best chapters I've ever read! very good job hahaha I lov the Narcisa from your fic

Well! That's the first time I've read a Lily and James like that, never mind Vernon & Petunia. Awesome, really. Can't for the life of me figure Remus out. He should have supported Harry right from the get go.

Fantastic.

No ideal pat ending, but a true and realistic ending and I loved how you portrayed Volemort. The man had to be charismatic enough to collect followers the first time he was in power, I can't believe all that charisma would have vanished when he lost his body. I get tired of fan fiction authors who portray him as a temper tantrum throwing two year old sitting on a jumped up throne throwing Cruio at everyone. Riddle was very charming and very smart and very insane and you portrayed all of those in your story. If he threw Cruios around like a man feeding popcorn to birds, he would have NO followers or his followers would betray him or even try to kill him. JK Rowling showed that a little when he left England to find Grindwauld, he didn't leave everything to his followers, just the inconsequential stuff. I also like how you portrayed Peter, Neville and Narcissa. A revenge driven Neville was very scary, but probably not that far from the truth, if he had someone push him in that direction.

Again excellent story!

Great Story! I've read the entire thing and I have to say it's one of the greatest HP FanFics I've ever read! It's argueably BETTER than Rowlings final few books!