Really good start! Great writing as well. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I hope you do decide to continue this. It's a good start. Will Sam end up a vampire or did the holy water do the trick?

I love this!

Your Dean-writing is incredibly on-the-mark. :D

You might want to watch Dead Man's Blood again, remember the only way to kill a vampire is by beheading.

Ok...so ya gonna update soon or what? I really like this story and I wanna see how it ends...SO PLEASE UPDATE!

Hey you! I'm still hanging around, waiting for this one continue...

hm, somehow i doubt it will be continued, but I still thought it was good

please update soon!PLEASE IT'S SO GOOD!

ok, so what happened to chapter 3? I'm glad you're doing this - if you ARE doing this, especially after reading your one shot about Sam being a vampire. Let's get going girl!

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caroline

hey great story I hope you write more of it! I just found it and it has been awhile since you last posted and now I am afraid I will never know how it ends! please update! :)

OK OK Where the hell is the next chapter! I hate it when a great story is written, only for the author to forget about it mid way through. Dust it off and finish it please! OHH and did i tell you i liked it?? LOL

This looks very promising! It's got action (or implied action) but isn't just a did-this-then-did-this-then-did-that. It's compelling, I especially like Dean's inner voice. You write well - I was already a fan of your Charmed-Smallville crossover Out of Place - and you write stories that are actually in character. It's hard to find very many of those, they're rare gems to be treasured when they're found. Good luck with this one!

This is a gripping story and I would love to see how it turns out. I love your style, but 'To Be Continued' only counts if you actually intend to continue. Please don't leave this unfinished.

hoping to read more soon

Nice story! Can't wait for chapter 3.