I love how James refered to it as a "fiasco"! That's hilarious! And it's always fun to name relationships, too!

I love the imagery of the two lazing about on the couch-it really fits with them! And it's rather cute. Have you ever seen the picture... it's on some site somewhere... that features the two of them draped over the couch, Remus playing with a kitten? It's adorable, and that's the image I saw when you described them.

"It was fun the other night, wasn't it?" Hahaha... wow... my mind was sure in the gutter

I love how overprotective Siri is! "You'll freeze your fingers off" It's so cute! “Lily still thinks I lack the ability to watch you myself.” Sirius smiled. “She says I need more watching than you, but still.” So cute! They're still little boys! I love it when Lily is featured as the "maternal figure" ...the mommy overlord that keeps all of the boys in line.

EEP! I love that motorcycle crashing thing! hahaha, cute! And I can so see Sirius doing that!

"Not straight into their house this time" More implied dirty-mind stuff. Sorta makes you wonder just what happened last time?

Oh! I love describing voices as chirps! It's quite descriptive, and does well to set the tone for the character.

AH! Li'l 'Arry! A cooing baby! Tugging at Remmie's hair! How cute!

Concerned Remmie... and then Lily's all like "yup-raising a husband, too" I totally see James as the type that refuses to grow up. Being all like "We VIDEO GAMES PIZZA ROLLERCOASTERS" at forty. That line totally rocked.

HAHAHA! Lily is so being the mother figure here. Feeding the boys... just so they're comfortable... then pouncing on them! And James, being the immature sort, just stuffs his face so he doesn't have to respond. And of course... Remus is like the responsible one of all of them "I shall take all the blame!" Says he. Hahaha-it's so cute!

I love the little kisses! And I especially like Peter's reaction, because in most all of the fics out there, few bother to mention that others might be a bit uncomfortable with the relationship. ...I'm glad it's Peter, though. He strikes me as the close minded sort. (and he's about to BETRAY THEM ALL! LI'L 'ARRY! JAMES! LILY! *ahem*)

Ahh... and there's the betrayal. Wow... I must say... that was impressive. You managed to establish the loving, carefree, family-like atmosphere, in order to contrast the desolate lonliness that Remus must endure, left without all of his loved ones, all at once. Brilliant... and very well-written. The quote at the end did well to conclude the story, and it all tied together very nicely. I look forward to reading more of your works.

Also... sorry for the long review. I wrote it as I read it, as is probably evident. Thank you for an awesome fic!