 >:( 2009-05-12 . chapter 10 I'm sorry to say (well, to be honest, not quite) that this is a HUGE mary sue. I mean who in the galaxy has so many powers and reacts to situations like this? NO ONE. Hell, the superhero comics don't even exist in the Star Wars universe.
Read 'til this chapter and gave up. For your sake (and other readers) please stop writing stories with this kind of lousy characterisation |
 Reno Casanova 2008-12-31 . chapter 10The first time I read this story I loved it. The second time around not so great. I'm now seeing flaws I missed before. Elena is a Mary Sue. Not a largely obvious one but she is. |
 Longing for Saisei 2008-05-16 . chapter 32I loved most bits of it!Thank you! |
 Longing for Saisei 2008-05-16 . chapter 18I Love It! |
 Longing for Saisei 2008-05-16 . chapter 16Awesome! |
 Longing for Saisei 2008-05-16 . chapter 12NICE!! |
 Longing for Saisei 2008-05-16 . chapter 5Yeah! I LOVE IT! |
 Morgomir 2008-04-15 . chapter 32I love this story. I realize it's been two years since the last update but please continue this masterpiece. Keep up the good work. |
 PorcelainHeart94 2008-04-12 . chapter 24HAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHHA I really love this story. **whines** I wanna torture Sith Lords! But I guess it's too late for that. You should have used evil rabid monkeys or squirrels on them! HAHHAHAHA! Or made them watch The Doodlebops. (Trust me. It's torture.) |
 Sexy Scottish Accent 2007-08-26 . chapter 19Leia is the best diplomat ever. Go Jinn Twins! |
 Sexy Scottish Accent 2007-08-26 . chapter 18I like her choice of lightsaber colour. Qui-Gon is teh p'ownage (don't ask). Maybe Darth is going to kill Palpy...as he's doing the laundry by hand! HA! |
 Sexy Scottish Accent 2007-08-26 . chapter 17Dang it...I was hoping the whole class would walk in on them. That would have been funny...oh well. I laugh in Palpy's wrinkly old face. |
 Sexy Scottish Accent 2007-08-26 . chapter 16I like the little Palpy comments at the beginning/end...lol. It would have been funny if the class saw Vader talking with Elena. Maybe that happens in the next chapter... I best be getting off to that. |
 Sexy Scottish Accent 2007-08-26 . chapter 15Ha, that made me laugh. I should've known that something like that would happen. |
 Sexy Scottish Accent 2007-08-26 . chapter 14Grr to Vader...why does he still think Obi betrayed him?? He's an idiot...no offense, I just meant Vader in general. |