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| anonymous 2005-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abusevery beautifully written |
| Azamiko 2005-12-06 ch 1,  | abuse^_^Pretty cool... |
| Hafthand 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good. I enjoyed the writing style and the idea of Jayne making her real. You should follow it up with a story where the process is complete and he has no choice but to see her for who she is! Anyway, great story! Love, Ally |
| slaygirl 2005-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this. I kind of hope you write a sequel, but it really works great as a stand alone. You need to write more because you have a way with words. It was very beautifully written, it made my day thanks :) |