It's so cute. Actions tell louder than words after all.

How touching! I can totally see this happening in the near future. Short, sweet, and unbelievably simple, this is truly a story that manages to tug at your heart-strings in mere moments.

... Geez, I'm so melodramatic... but it's Ino and Shikamaru! XD Anyways, I love how you listed those little things they do. x3

Aww, that it so cute!

I loved the story!

and about your writing, I just love how you created emphasis with the words. Very creative by the way. Genuis!

Aw! You are so right!! I could so see that happening in the manga or anime!



-BB

"Neither were surprised because they had seen it coming a mile away;" and the part about being "an old married couple" are exactly why ShikaIno is my OTP!1. :D

wow that was short dod ILOVE SHIKAINO! ^^ that was wierd to saqy i love naruto ps right more

Oh that was so cute and swet :D
Perfect characterization of Shikamaru and Ino. I'm faving this.

Okay you officially rock! Congrats.

And why can't other people see it too? :)

Aw, that's sweet, the comparisons between the two really fit. Great job!

hee hee, so cute its so good! You are one of my fave authors now! YAY! -throws confetti- Whopee for you -smile-

beautiful. :) SHIKAINO IS TOTALLY

One of those stories that makes me go "oh, so cute~!" at like 100 decibils

aw, that was so sweet:D
really it was..so cute, fluffy and sweet!!

lol, thats a really sweet and touching story. ^_^
great job capturing their character.
i loved it!