I am liking this. it's a fresh story line for the Peter Pan fandom. it's sad that both Wendy and Peter are gone, but it doesn't feel so wrong when we still have Aleck around doesn't it? Or maybe I'm just biased. lol.

Be careful when writing. You sometimes leave words out and you called Aleck Hook once (I don't think that was intentional was it?)

take care and keep going. it's looking good.

I was wondering if you ever did continue the story...I didn't see it when you first uploaded it. I like it. Keep it up. If you want any input or want to run anything by...don't be hesitant to ask. :)

I like this so far. I think I should read the one this is based on though. You did a good job writing this. Let's see, constructive criticism... uhm... there's a lot of italics? Keep up the good work.

WOO HOOT!
ahaha, this is even better on the internet! lolz
very good start!

YAY! I'M IN UR AUTHOR'S NOTE!! WEE HAW!

ttyl, Tanya