This is an amazing story! Read it like three times :) x

This was a really, really good story. You are a great writer.

Omg this is so awesome do not stop writing !

im crying my eyes out now!

great story so far

i could not stop reading it. i was about to hyperventilate at the very end.

good story...whats the sequal called??

I love the only love he knows part... I mean, it's so true for the story...

Sequal please!

hi! i haven't seen this story 4 a while- but i LOVED the ending- can't wait till the sequel cya

GREAT ending...is the voice his conscience? sorry im normally a little slow picking up on things like this lol...hurry up with the sequel!

AWESOME CONCLUSION! Looking forward to the sequel.

What a great ending! Congratulations! I loved your story, and I can't wait for the sequel!

W00T W00T COMPLETE! SUCH AN AWESOME STORY, MUST READ SEQUEL NOW! POST IT POST IT POST IT POST IT!

Great chapter looking foward to the sequel can u tell me who the voice is i think it might be his Dad maybe? not sure

ok i dont get it...like what the DJ said...but anyway its still good...