Wow. I bet Yami could get a lot of money if he were to publish that. And the fact that it is told with such modest wording... poor yuugi.

This is hilarious.

Hahahaahahahhah loved it funny and cute

ma selang na si yami

ahahhahahhaha _ laughed so hard at that _ yami has mad writing skills lol :p the funny thing is that there is probably a fanfiction out there that is like that and is being serious :p keep it up and DFTBA!

Ffff- Yami's such a great story writer. I'd read his fic any time.

HAHA, that was amazing! Thank you, I really needed a good laugh. Nothing better to fulfill that position than a horny Pharaoh and his "innocent" partner. Oh gosh, that was too good.

"The mighty Pharaoh Atemu was completely awesome."

"'You must have mind-blowing sex. Only that will save him.'"

Those were too rich. xD

And yes, I suppose Yugi will have to write that story after all... One can only imagine how a teacher would react to reading Yami's lovely story.

Awesome job!

x

adorable

That was hilarious! Fantastic job!

Lol, Atem a story means non-fiction and last time I cheacked that was just your opinons on your past life. Lol funny story!

that was sooooooooo funny how do come up with these ideas

Lol; Yami's story sound like a scenario of a badly made porn movie.

XD

My throat hurts from trying to restrain myself from laughing now... XD

lol this is greatlol

write/update this story its a good one and its uber funny

ROFLMFAO!

its like 12:00 here and my dad was yelling at me for laughing so loud when my mom is trying to sleep.. thats how hilarious this was. :D loved it. hardest ive ever laughed while reading a fic. GREAT JOB! 5 STARS! WRITE MORE!