o fluffy, I tried to go to your illustration but it failed, typical

I love it! This is one of my favorites!

Gee, how did I not find this before? I love the drawing that accompanies this, and the story makes it all the better! So sweet, and well done! :)

cute! write more or is this a 1 shot?
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Awsome XD

O!! this was soo god!! ^-^.

What a sweet little fic! the end was a bit sudden though.

Aw

This is really good!I can't see the picture though...Are you sure it's the right URL?Great start,update soon!

Aw, so cute. HI! (waves)

SO cute. Going to the fav's.

So...Awesome... That was so kyoote, ne! ^-^ And the drawing was awesum too! :3 Looking forward to more of your fanfiction!

*Dies from the adorableness* *_* darn it navie! now im addicted to the jinmay/chiro-ness! So cute XD i loves it!

AWW!! CUTE!! Very awesome Navie. And great pic too! I love the dress. Jin-May does look good in blue. ^^

Aw...that's so sweet!

Welcome to fanfiction! I know what its like to be a new author too! Want to R&R my story The Princess's Of Shugazoom? Would appereciate it! Update soon!