| Reviews for Elfenmärchen |
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unearthing 9/24/09 . chapter 4This story is absolutely fantastic. I do hope you haven't given up on it. |
itachi iz meh Bitch 8/30/09 . chapter 1 You are THE best writer ever! I can't stop loving EVERYTHING you write! it's so sad and...your such a trickster ya'know that? it's a good talent so please please PRETTY please update. I love your story. |
ella 7/14/09 . chapter 1 i dont understand how people can read this without being put off by the style of your sentences and paragraphs. no offense, really, it's nothing personal. i mean, your plots are usually gold, but the context...your syntax needs work. you need to maybe concentrate on the little things (grammar and flow, specifically) that make fanfics wonderful. work on that please. i'd really like to read something of yours without cringing at the amateur-ish kind of writing you never seem to fail to dish out. |
tcl7189 4/27/09 . chapter 4Deep deep story...hope to see a new chapter soon... |
Immortalfantasylover 4/19/09 . chapter 4Uh huh! I am awesome! I totally knew it was Hinata. Please update soon1 |
neko-koo 3/16/09 . chapter 1Woah... |
rikary 3/14/09 . chapter 4i like ur stories but... i wish you would update and finish them off x] p.s. pls update /endless/watever |
Akai Jigoku Hana 2/19/09 . chapter 4I luved it. . Update soon. AJH |
shika'sgurl22 1/2/09 . chapter 4Sorry it took so long to review. I really like this story and I can't wait for the next update. Keep up the great work and update soon! |
suka uchiha 1/2/09 . chapter 4UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON! PLZ PRETTY PLZ! I LOVE THIS STORY! ITS SO INTERESTING! |
suka uchiha 1/2/09 . chapter 1love this stroy! |
sasusaku74 12/26/08 . chapter 4oh dear i totally saw that coming! i knew it! but i have no idea what coming next so if you would PLEASE update soon i would be so happy lol i love this story-good job |
KuroAngelique 12/26/08 . chapter 4*cry* Your story always leave a deep impression to me, either it was a content one, or just incredibly sad... You always seemed to pull out different emotions towards me:) I love the way you use a plot where the one who leaves isn't Sasuke but Sakura:) I love the way you describe their feelings, a lot. One of the sentence in this fic struck me a lot.. ; How could one be sad, if they don't understand the meaning of sadness? I have said that sentence once to myself; infact, I have a full collection of those realted sentences; How could one smile, if they don't undertand the meaning of happiness? How could one be mad, if they don't understand the meaning of anger? How could one hate, if they don't understand the meaning of hatred? And... how could one love, if they don't understand the meaning of love? All of this sentences are all have been used by me in daily life:) I enjoy this fic truly and I shall be awaiting for your next update, until next time, Happy Holidays. |
nizzzybear 12/24/08 . chapter 4update please ;D |
Clockwork Mockingbird 12/21/08 . chapter 4Woah. This is a serious story. I hope you update soon. Meep! |