Jeez that was good... I think I am gonna cry now. Mainly cuz I get very into these things...

You DID NOT write this! I was looking for this too! You are like so dam good! You're amazing! Write more star wars because you rule! PLEASE? PLEASE!

Unrealistic? This is the exact storyline I discussed with a fellow warsie friend of mine (who, ironically, is named Candi!) Anakin goes DV, Obiwan and Ami act on repressed feelings, Anakin gets jealous, and then it plays a part in Ani's demise. Obi is such a tortured soul, isn't he? LOVE IT!

*sniff*... I love this story! You surely are a very talented writer!

*sob* Poor Ani!

That's it. I'm killing Anakin. No one stop me. That'll teach that @#$% Amidala not to run off with other men. I'll make him runaway, then he dies of a broken heart...

Oh my gosh! How sad:( This is making me cry. I agree with Theed, I don't think that they will ever have an affair like that. But it was great of you to make them realize that it was a mistake. Poor Ani. If only he had waited for Obi-Wan to help him up. To let him take Amidala first and then him. Damn Anakin! Damn Obi-Wan! Damn Padme! Oh, um, great story.

Oh, wow. I could just hear their voices screaming at each other. That was so...emotional, espescially how Anakin just lost it. Excellent!

Really good. An actual love triangle fanfic where they both actually seem to regret it.

THAT WAS SOOOOOOO SAD!

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I wanna read this story AT ONCE!

Ok, something's wrong. It says file not found. What the hell is happening?

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great story, filled with bitterness and hatred...keep up the good work PJ

OMG! That was so awesome! I think that the mind battles could happen. George is always looking for new ways to portray battle. I don't think that Obi and Ami would have an affair, just feelings. But, other than that, I totally enjoyed your story! This makes all of my writing look really bad. ) On a lighter note, good luck with Confirmation. I remember that I was so nervous! What saint did you chose? Mine was Elizabeth Ann Seaton. And the other cool thing about my confirmation was that I was confirmed on the same day that I fell in love with Star Wars. Neat, huh! No, nothing will be thrown at you for not putting up Memories. I still have yet to put up Scara, as well as another Homecoming.

Wow! Really powerful! I loved it :-)! Sometimes I wanted to cry, and sometimes I felt like laughing. Great Job, Candy!