|Reviews for A Broken Wing|
| Riker15 12/4/05 . chapter 1
| allitersonance 12/4/05 . chapter 1
Interesting plot, with Harry thinking he actually DESERVED all that... but having half of it in bold is a little annoying. Nothing else really stands out, at least nothing negative, so I'll just assume that the story's almost perfect. 8.5/10
Oh yeah, are you going to reveal who that woman is next chapter?