awesome story, loved the plot and everything. you should definitely keep writing this story. awesome cliffhanger, if you do make a next chapter it will be as good as this one. AWESOME!

P.S: just a bit of work on the grammar, 'coz sometimes it got a bit confusing.

HEY! AWESOME!

keep on writing

its okay so far... i'm just wondering why Davis and Dennis are acting like they're weaker than Henry. Davis especially is a really powerful guy. He should've been able to take down a bunch of hunters and bandits easily lol...

good job so far though. Keep it going, don't stop.. I'm curious to see how the story ends

Keep it up plz! All the little fighter 2 sotries haven't been updated at all!

Hello blacksyth. I remember seeing a flash movie of the little fighters but I've never played the game. Is this your first story? If so I think you are off to a very nice start. The story is easy to read and follow so you're doing well. Keep up the good work.