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| Fullmetal Guitarist 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseLO ferkin' L! Best Digimon humor I've read in years. Keep writing, you're good at it. |
| Circeus 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseQuick typo fix: "did somebody have to writhe that for you?" -> "writhe" should be"write". Although the formatting was a bit distracting at first, you managed to get a great dialogue setting there. I really felt I was just happening to be eavesdropping on the gang. I don't think the Digimon's characterization was very good, though. I really can't see Gatomon calling these two "idiots" (unless something *serious* happened in the other room, of course). |
| DebiruFlonne 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseThat could have been SO bad, but you managed to make the story work and the humor was intact - I'm impressed. Keep writing, you have an unusual style and I want to see more. I especially like how you incorporate unique ideas from the digimon series in your stories. -DebiruFlonne |
| Katrina Izumi09 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseLOL! I love your stories! I envy your writing style, San! You always write funny stories! Keep up the good work! |
| Vigatus 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the ending |
| Matt'sxLuver 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abusethat was HILLARIUOS! lol, ^_^ MattxLuver |