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Reviews For: The Chrysalis Dialogues

Fullmetal Guitarist
2006-06-14
ch 1,
abuseLO ferkin' L! Best Digimon humor I've read in years. Keep writing, you're good at it.
Circeus
2006-04-25
ch 1,
abuseQuick typo fix:
"did somebody have to writhe that for you?" -> "writhe" should be"write".

Although the formatting was a bit distracting at first, you managed to get a great dialogue setting there. I really felt I was just happening to be eavesdropping on the gang.

I don't think the Digimon's characterization was very good, though. I really can't see Gatomon calling these two "idiots" (unless something *serious* happened in the other room, of course).
DebiruFlonne
2006-04-18
ch 1,
abuseThat could have been SO bad, but you managed to make the story work and the humor was intact - I'm impressed. Keep writing, you have an unusual style and I want to see more. I especially like how you incorporate unique ideas from the digimon series in your stories.
-DebiruFlonne
Katrina Izumi09
2006-03-29
ch 1,
abuseLOL! I love your stories! I envy your writing style, San! You always write funny stories! Keep up the good work!

Vigatus
2005-12-08
ch 1,
abuseI really liked the ending
Matt'sxLuver
2005-12-04
ch 1,
abusethat was HILLARIUOS! lol, ^_^

MattxLuver
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