Damn dark, and man do I like it. Excellent job of getting inside Red's twisted little head.

You probably see a lot of reviews like this but still...

Gorgeous. Evocative and stunning eloquence. The words have a poetic feel to them. Rather like a prose-like drabble in which the slim portion is given a second (and third and fourth) helping, but the reader is starved for more.

Is it just me, or did you also add some of your own story telling to this? In anycase, this is great.

That was wonderful,. Chilling, powerful, and perfectly Red.

This. Is. Wonderful. I love how you drop little hints of the comic in this fic, it's amazingly subtle and well played. The pacing and flow of this is very personified by Red as well. It's brutal and yet, a little delicate.

This is a beautifully woven story. I love the details and imagery. Lovely job indeed. Hope you won't mind me adding this to my C2.

This is amazing! Your writing style is so vivid. I love the feeling of being inside Red's mind were everything is so dark and unfortunately real. Also, I like the comparison between younger Red and November and how Red has a weakness for flowers. Very well done, going in my favs.

...I am in awe of your genius. This is absolutely beautiful. It's so descriptive, it's so true and it's so...Red. I think it really speaks the way Red's mind would. I love it. In fact I love YOU for writing it. I must applaud your literary genius.

"Her grandmother's lung was a pink moth fluttering through the mesh of her ribs."

I love you. For every single moment of this. I wanted to sink my teeth into it and just bite down - your prose is so delicious. What a perfect, perfect Red.

This is a beautiful piece of work; you're a brilliant writer. I like how you picked up and heightened the the theme of the relationship between Red and November and how Red views Perrault in regards to November. Gorgeously done.

It took me a little while to finally review, didn’t it? I absolutely love this story -it gives a great view into Red’s mind. The imagery is great and the implied relationship between November and Perrault is executed perfectly. Written very well with subtlety, but still straight-forward. Very nice.

Eh...I like Red. A lot. But, one question; are you putting your own views of November into Red's thoughts, or just the way you think Red would see her? Because November isn't at all a sissy. Try reading the comic again if you really want to get a grasp of her personality; she's not afraid to stand up for herself, which is more than I can say for most princesses. Please don't go into the whole "Princesssissyninny" thing...Anyway, aside from the whole mis-characterization, I really, really liked how you got into Red's head. But, even Red should know what November is really like...

Wow.

This has always been one of my favorites; it was actually the first one of your works that I read. Never fails to amaze me how well you weave in metaphors and emotional depth into so short a piece. Awesome.

Aah, I love the inner workings of Red's mind.

This is *amazing*. The style and the content are so very Red. I love being able to see into her head, and finding the beast there. I love how her own experience of sexuality(blood) filters her relationships with November and Perrault.

Beautiful! Whatever you do, keep writing.

That is creepily beautiful and REALLY well-done. o_o* Wow, just wow