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Reviews For: The Dangers of Westernization

catgrrl
2007-12-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseHA! that was great! keep up the short, cute fics and write long ones, too (if u haven't already)!
kenihiko
2006-09-30
ch 1,
abusesilly fun. i can just imagine misao with a caffine buzz. actually kaoru and yahiko may be sort of the same way, and that would drive kenshin buggy too.
thanks alot
skenshingumi
2006-05-14
ch 1,
abuseI think all Aoshi has to do is introduce Misao on caffeine to Saito and he will most certainly take care of who is supplying her with coffee.
Warg
2006-04-08
ch 1,
abuseHey...

Haha... its 5 am and u've still managed to crack me.

Poor aoshi... i remember te first time my lil sis "discovered" coffe... *shudder*

Great work on this... lovely brisk prose...

Cya..
Hakucho
2006-01-22
ch 1,
abuseLOL poor Aoshi! Maybe OKINA's the the culprit, ne? XD

Very cute story!
crystalfeathers
2006-01-14
ch 1,
abuseThat was pretty funny! :) I am a newbie still, and so far I've only wrote a few chapters of one story. It looks like you've been around for awhile. I can understand if your busy. I'm sure I'll be the same way too, when the time comes. I'd rather wait ten years for one good update, rather then 2 seconds when you "have" to update. Good luck with coledge.
Ms Western Ink
2005-12-13
ch 1,
abuse*-laughs-*

Best part for me:
"He needed to find whoever had been supplying the Aoiya with coffee, and see to it they left the country."

Left the country indeed! Very cute!
evilalternateendingstorywri...
2005-12-11
ch 1,
abuseFun story! I love it!
Midori Konbu
2005-12-08
ch 1,
abuseheheheh...that was quite hilarious...Misao without coffee was pretty bad enough for Aoshi...I can't imagine it... I think you should write a continuation for this fic...like perhaps...what would happen to the man who brought the coffee into Japan..would he be seeing Aoshi's kodachi out of its sheath? :)
WraithWoLf368
2005-12-07
ch 1,
abusevery cute. Loved the ending!
aienne
2005-12-06
ch 1,
abusethat was fun!

i could picture misao jumping around because of the caffeine..extra genkiness!

teehee!
KC Evans
2005-12-04
ch 1,
abuseHehehehe, very cute and funny piece. I absolutely agree that Misao on caffeine (four cups no less!) would create havoc like the world has never seen!

Looking forward to more stories from you! Congrats on your 10th post!
PraiseDivineMercy
2005-12-04
ch 1,
abuse*giggles* Oh... Misao on caffiene is a frightening thing indeed... I wonder what a triple expresso would do to her? ^_^
SpaceRoses
2005-12-04
ch 1,
abuse*Laughs and falls out of the chair* That was hilarous! The thought of Misao on caffine is just scary! And congrats on this being your tenth story!
charmed-sword
2005-12-04
ch 1,
abuseHa ha! This was delightful! And very original too. I mean, coffee would have had to come into Japan during the Meiji era, and I have no doubt that Misao would become highly addicted..lol...^_^ Poor Aoshi-sama! I could just feel the overload of energy rolling off her. You and Spaceroses must have your hands very full with Holly-chan! *grin* My nine year old sister is exactly the same...some days I feel like dying. ^_^
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