Oh my goodness; I absolutely LOVED this. I'm really sad you're not updating it..I would have read every word eagerly. The way you portray the characters is not cheesy and overdone; it's realistic and in-character; and yet it's sweet and shippy. XD This is probably the best piece of Rocketshipping fiction I've read, and I've read a lot. Again, I'm really quite sad that it probably will never be updated again, since it really is amazing. ;.;

That was awsome! You really should write more. I really want to see the part when the fail. ;) It's really cute, and written nicly. You could read my story...but it's pretty bad. My other stories are a lot better. ;)

It's really good. Are you going to write the rest like when they fail their test at Pokemon tech and run away. I love you Team Rocket stories(and I love your website).

Aw! How sweet! Methinks Jessie and James would make very cute couple. And they're both complete idiots... And I say that in a nice way!

OOOO I LOVED IT!! It's almost exactly what was in my head and I was planning on writing a fic about it. But alas, depression SUCKS and you know, I can't do anything I like to do cuz I don't feel like it. :-( ANYWAY, superb job!! I was gonna ask you for permission to write a bunch of fics offa that one, like a series, cuz if I wrote mine now, everyone would think I copied yours. anyway, c-ya

It's so fitting that it could easily be created as part of the TV series - James is so sweet and concerned here and Jessie shows a very human side.

Great fic, prequels have to be the hardest things to write...^_^

That's a cute story ^-^

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that was so great! I love Team Rocket and this story potrayed them exactly as I imagined their early days to be. I can't wait for a sequel or something!

I love the story. I always wondered how James and Jessie got together. I really enjoyed the story. Great writing. Keep up the good work.

HAH! Funny. I always wanted to see that b!tch Cassidy get some egg on HER face.

:-) Glad you finally posted it, Mandy. Great Job!

Big smile on my face the whole time I was reading this. Funny, infuriating, exciting, and oh so sweet! You really know how to engage an audience.

This story rules!!!! Thank you Mandy for another great TR story! ^__^ So cool and sweet! This girl and story rules! hehe See ya!
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