Reviews for Watch Out for Him

Reviews For: Watch Out for Him

internet-girl 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abuseDanmit! i got sucked into the story w/out reading who wrote it! even though im not a narco lover some of the things were pretty true im a jess lover! sry! but dean wasnt bad, he was probebly the nicest 1st boyfriend u could have! (im still a jess lover!)
Ghostwriter 2007-02-03 ch 1,	abuseAwesome. Catch ya on the flip side.
Finnabair 2006-10-26 ch 1,	abuseVery interesting premise! I have a little bit of criticism for you. This isn't meant as a flame, this is just to help you improve. A lot of this seems really very out of character. I don't think that Jess would do this - I got the impression that he just wanted to stay out of it as much as he could, that it was Rory's thing. But that's interpretation, of course. I like the references to the previous episodes, but a lot of those memories are probably pretty painful for him...I don't think he'd just say them to someone. (Though a tiny bit of nitpick - the fight he and Dean got into was pretty even, it wasn't really Dean beating him up.) Some of the dialogue seems off to me as well. There are a few grammar errors in the fic, you might want to get a beta reader to help you with those. They could help with the characterization, too. Anyway, good luck with your future writing, and I hope you at least consider my advice, Finnabair
jeffandjimmieschick 2006-04-14 ch 1,	abusecan u give this story more background? i would really love to hear more about jess' relationship with vanessa. please don't make this story a one-shot.
Narco 2005-12-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseYES! there are still some Narco-lovers out there! I almost thought I was the only one left..;P sweet story :)
Rory Forrester 2005-12-06 ch 1,	abusei like this fic, although i think you should edit the bottom bit a little bit more and space it out a tiny bit, because it's a little confusing. wow. i just used the word "bit" more than i ever have before. or ever want to again. anyways, i enjoyed this little fic. i've always been fascinated by what Logan would think about the whole Dean/Rory/Jess thing and then the Rory/Dean cheating on Lindsay thing. and just a quickie question about the ending: i understand that it's Jess talking about Vanessa [god, i suck at reading stuff--you don't need to edit that, i just read it way to fast], but i don't really understand the "And she had always been so much better with Dean than she was with Logan." Do you mean that she was a better person or something? i'm just a tad confused. but, still, a great fic. and, about what you said at the top about "Discussed Narco (because, I can’t write a Gilmore Girls fic without them in it)" word. i hear you, loud and clear. and

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