Yay! Dramatic and funny!

I think Peach did it. She was singing the "Bubble Gum Pop" tune and could've stabbed Roy when he died.

Ness has sort of been flying under the radar, so he might've done it.

Exactly what I want to know- Who's the murderer? Please update soon, I'll get anxious over this. I think the murderer is Luigi, Ganondorf, Samus and Bowser. I like Bowser, and unfortuantely, he's been there every time there has been a murder. Falco was with Fox, arguing during Mario's terrible demise. Oh, and maybe...the fridge is important to the killings?

Pikachu and Luigi must know something about the killings and the murderer's motives. Luigi was right there when Mario was shot, and Pikachu acted weirdly around Jigglypuff.

I bet the murderer hasn't even been mentioned yet, so maybe the Murderer is ...? G&W? Maybe not...Anyways, please update soon, I'll be definately sure to review!!

Oh my, the plot thickens. Maybe...There's more than one killer? Luigi and Ganondorf are who I am guessing are the Murderers. Marth was too open about killing Roy to be the killer, I think. Yay for Bowser? Too bad Pichu died. Yet again, good job.

Pikachu was acting weirdly about the Bowser's party incident, and Jiggly was very suspicious. What about Luigi? He was there when Mario dropped dead all of a sudden, maybe he kept quiet because he was threatened?

Any way, good job, I look forward to even more.

I think the murderer is...Link! or maybe Mewtwo...I'm baffled...Good work, though, I look forward to more. :P

wow that was the best chapter yet, idk who is killer i guess maybe still Ness... When is the fifth chapter coming out I think there will be 11 chapters

Hmm.. this is tough It might be Yoshi Ness though i still think it is... Or maybe Marth but that would be too obvious. Wait maybe Luigi
My choices are Yoshi, Ness, Marth, Luigi.

That was a good chapter have u ever thought of maybe having more then one character starring in a chapter and then trading off randomly. I personally think the murderer is Ness still

It had to be Luigi but that would be too simple i think it was Kirby.

Glad to see you're still writing these. I love them! Keep it up!

The Murderer is MARTH! i can just feel it! it's so obvious!

>.>

A year? That long?

I love you tiki. It was totally angsty and deep and whatnot.

:jig:

P.S. I'm not cheating on you, hoogiman just says that because he's jealous.

I love the story so far i would of posted this on the 4th ch but i have something to say... How Can You Not Care About MARTH!? sry sry but once again I like the fic so far

I know who killed Fox. In my words, it was... it was...IT WAS...





THE KING OF HYRULE!!1!1!11!!