Very interesting storyidea that works surprisingly well. It's refreshing to see this version of Manticore, still not good by any means but not the Evil organization it was in the show either.

I've always been a fan of Dark Max and you did an excellent job of writing her. Dark without being psychotic I mean.

It would be very interesting to see this version of DA/Manticore crossed with some other universes. There should be plenty of possibilities with transgenic personel spread throughout the military and law enforcement.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

good start..and Deck is here...i wonder if Alec shows up in the following chapters.

Very interesting story. I enjoyed it very much. It's rare that someone protrays transgenics in an unflattering light (cold, savage, and all that).

As for your background story, it's a very nice idea.

Excellent work.

That was good! It's always nice to read a story that focuses on Max's transgenics abilities and the nature of Manticore rather than who Max ends up with romantically.

I hope you write more stories soon.

I like the idea for this story. A normal crime lab trying to figure out project Manticore... unfortunately I have mixed feelings about the overall results of the story. Max as a cold hearted killer still working for Manticore bothers me a little. I know you explained all the changes in the beginning, and I can understand that Max wanted her clone-sister's killers, but it's just a little hard for me to swallow for some reason. Also you may want to go back and fix your date/time stamps, they're a little confusing at first.