You spelled soccer wrong at least 5 times. That deserves an award.

whoa, 2 deaths in a story. sccaarry...

Oh...so sad...T.T But very good. ...I'm off to go be sad now...

Angst: A story written by Tiger Dauthi.

Definite angst in this story! TAIORA FOREVER! By any chance, could you write one that actually ends happy?

Care: So, you finally wrote a Taiora...didja? It was a bit rushed though. Why weren't you at Chinese School? Oh...check out my profile. It's Kindness and Care.

Um... ok. That was pretty sad. But if Sora has a /f that cares bout her. She is a idiot to kill herself. I mean come on. Tai isn't worth killing yourself.

Blerg. Stories like this give angst a bad name... And you really shouldn't kill yourself just because your 'soulmate' or whatever has.

That was very sad. I found it very interesting.

That was really well written. Though maybe you should fix up the lines on it (it really bugs me when every second line goes half-way and stops...).

That was really short, but it got its point across. Imagining Tai, being the pig he is, anorexic is hard to believe, but it just shows how terrible he feels without Sora. I feel bad for him. I don't care about Sora; I lost all liking for her when she gave those stupid cookies to Yamato. Cool story anyway. It's really sad. Great job!

Awesome! I KNOW it's awesome! Keep on writin!

you have writing talent. and you chose a good couple to show it off with.

It was a great story. Love it alot

WOW!