Ron is still dense. Even in death, she's scolding him. *sniffles*

Simply excellent! I really enjoyed this story a lot, the characterization of Ron is good, and I love the dialogue! Well done :)

Wonderful range of emotion here. You can see Ron having real trouble moving on. The contrast between Michelle and Kim (and not just the physical) worked really well. Had to let my eyes clear before I could type. And of course, a magnificent last line.

Bitter-sweet, but very well-written and very ic, I think. I really like this one!

great shot i enjoyed it much

This is one of the best oneshots I have ever read. Ron's new love coming to see Kim, we don't need to know how she passed just that she did and Ron can't let her go.

Very heartwarming, excellently written, on my favorites no matter what now.

Thanks for the great read.

Left tears standing in my eyes also.

Must've missed it. How did Kim die in your story?

Wow a well done death fic. A depressing and happy end. He moves on and finds love but in the end his one true love is Kim. Thats what the poets write of my friend. Well done.

Until the next life as they say. Well looking forward to more to come.

Wow. That was deep, and moving. Very realistic, very well protrayed. The tone of the story really shines. Keep up the good work! I'm looking foward to reading more of this (if you intend to continue).

sad but sweet with nice touches of humour.

Sad and incredible.

A truly touching story.

aw. Aw. AW! didn't think I'd like a deathfic with a duf girlfriend, but not bad.

THANKS!

This was absolutely gorgeous. Ron is still... Ron, just older and a touch wiser. His fiancee seems fitting for him, and the moment is just touching. Absolutely touching, and humorous too. I give it two thumbs up.

(Good luck, though, you may get some 'OMG u killed kim!' people.)

First review dance!