 Rachel Lynn 4/29/01 . chapter 1Gyah! I absolutely *adore* this! Although, I think I like the other version of it better too -...but this one just rocks too! - *bounces happily* I loved the fear Jyou had...I think it's an incredibly understandable one to have, and I love the way you could portray it like that. And I also loved the Yamajyou-ness at the end. *sighs happily* Excellent fic as always! - |
 Kymaera 4/28/01 . chapter 1Poor Jyou. I'm glad Yama-chan was there to help him out. You're going to write more, right? Actually, you don't have to... it's just my ever present curiosity wanting to know what happens next. That and a love of Yamajyou, but we won't go into that... *grin* Great fic, as usual. Amaxophobia sounds just like something Jyou would have (being a worry wart and all) and don't worry, I could see where Koushirou was coming from, so he didn't sound too harsh to me... Very well done. |