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| vendy 2007-04-19 ch 19, anon. | abuseGood chapter. Looking forward to more. |
| Space-Case7029 2007-04-18 ch 19, | abuseGreat chapter. Good cliffhanger, can't wait to hear Martin's answer. Also, can't wait for the doctors to get there and see what happens. Maybe when the girls see how devoted Ray is to Neela, they'll want to try to get them together. Glad that you're home and doing okay. Hope that you can stay that way. Looking forward to more. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2006-12-19 ch 18, | abuseGreat chapter, Debbie. Sinbad really got a dose of reality with Carrie's condition, he thought it was hard watching Maeve suffer with pains during pregnancy and found out it was worse when it was your child you were watching. Not offending me by starting the subplot with Martin joining the army and Callie's reaction to it. There are a lot of boys that are joining the military for various reasons and there are families behind them that are supportive, but worrying that they may have to watch said boy get sent to Iraq. I support our troops, but I'm not thrilled about so many being sent to Iraq. Anxiously awaiting more. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2006-06-07 ch 17, | abuseGreat chapter. Nice and romantic. Love the surprise he had for her. The baby being a month old is so sweet. I imagine the twins' first birthday will be a special event for the whole family. Look forward to more soon. Audra Glad the writer's block is letting up. |
| Space-Case7029 2006-05-03 ch 16, | abuseGreat chapter. Was cute with the two new boys. Very emotional coversation between Carrie and Jeff, but appropriate for them to talk and get their feelings out in the open. Poor Jeff has a lot of work cut out for him to be patient enough to wait for Carrie to get over everything that's happened to her. Loved all the moments between the adult couples. Rumina and Brad's part was so sweet. He's good for her and she seems to be taken with Laurie. Sounds like Bryn's really wanting a large family. Might be funny if they had their own set of twins. Look forward to more soon. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2006-03-31 ch 15, | abuseGreat chapter. Love the way this story is going. It's going to be interesting watching Carrie work through her feelings about Jeff and Janey being 'together'. Brandon and Leo were good by testifying on Carrie's behalf during the custody hearing, and Brandon giving up the rights to the baby was especially sweet and sad. Him giving up his rights, would pave the way for someone else adopting her legally if the time ever becomes right. (Just thought of that last bit). Look forward to more soon. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2006-03-13 ch 14, | abuseGreat chapter. The anger Sinbad is revealing is similar to how he was in the second season of the show a bit, I just realized that with this chapter. Love the story. The couples took Brad's news rather well, except for Sinbad's rant, but can understand that since he was Talia's obsession. Maeve is so good for Sinbad and thank goodness he's taking her suggestion for talking to a professional for her and the kids. Laurie is so sweet and polite, her adoptive parents did a great job raising her. She's quite taken with Rumina, maybe she senses a kindred spirit and someone who can kind of understand what she's going through? Loved how Rumina and Laurie together helped Brad realize exactly what he feels for Rumina and how carefully he's going to have to tread to tell her. Love it and look forward to more soon. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2006-02-18 ch 13, | abuseGreat chapter. Loved the interesting new twist in the plot, always wondered how Talia could be as clueless as she was and slightly idiotic at times and come up with all the different plans that she had. Hope Dermott's right about how Maeve will treat Laurie. Look forward to more soon. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2006-02-09 ch 12, | abuseGreat chapter. Loved the interaction between the couples. Perfect how they planned for Brad and Rumina to catch the garter and bouquet. The girls have quite a scheme planned. Look forward to more soon. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2006-01-27 ch 11, | abuseGreat chapter. Loving, romantic moments between all the couples. Rumina and Brad sound like they're becoming the boys' favorite sitters or could become. Thanks to hearing that song and asking, if the girls ever want to know what their parent's 'song' was they won't have to ask now. Loved the talks between the couples. Look forward to more. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2006-01-17 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter. Loved it. It was so sweet and romantic. Loved the idea Maeve has for Valentine's Day. The way those two are they, practically, just have to use no protection to be fruitful and multiply. Look forward to more soon. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2006-01-10 ch 9, | abuseOh, great chapter, so sweet. Love the happiness that they get to have after all the trouble they've had and the drama they have yet to face. Look for more soon. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2006-01-03 ch 8, | abuseGreat chapter. Well, finally, everything's out in the open about Omar and Lea's deaths. Talia deserves everything that's coming to her for her crimes. Loved the parts with Rumina and Brad, they are becoming a favorite couple for me. Rumina's confidence is growing in leaps and bounds for the good this time. Sinbad has gone through so much to still be holding on as well as he is so far is amazing. Maeve's idea for therapy was a good one. Maybe he can get his feelings for Talia out in the open and help all of them. Loved how Doubar, while being shocked himself, was trying to look out for his little brother still and help Maeve with him. So sweet. Love the story and look forward to more soon. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2006-01-02 ch 7, | abuseGreat chapter. A great mix of all emotions. Happy, sad, tense, sad. Loved the chapter. The part between Doubar and Sinbad was so good with them talking about what happened with the miscarriage. Good cliffhanger. When Sinbad finds out what Talia did, she better hope that she does not see him face to face without guards and rails or bars in between them. Poor Maeve was as shocked as Bryn was finding out about Talia's part in Omar's death. Was good that she gave Doubar an idea that what was in the box was something that would really hit Sinbad's emotions hard, just wondering now if Doubar's going to give Sinbad a hint of what he knows or to let Maeve break the news to him. Look forward to more soon. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2005-12-28 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter. Sweet, happy, sad and anger all rolled into one. Loved it. Hope Talia gets what's coming to her in the end. The part about the babies with the boys, Carrie's baby, a new little Mitchell and an adopted baby was so cute. Can just see them with a whole houseful of kids. Look forward to the next part soon. Audra |