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ladyfuchsia416
2008-07-04
ch 35,
abuseAdding to everything. I read this along time ago, and am considering reading it again. I remember that I absolutely loved it! Great story and fantastic writing :)
Sunbattle
2008-06-20
ch 3,
abuseAwesomeness... i just wanna say i loved this whole story.
pinprickofhope
2008-06-03
ch 36,
abuseAmazingly wonderful! i liked it a lot and i think your very talented! the story was creative and didn't bore the crap out of me. (i loved reading it)
tennisplayerx33
2008-05-25
ch 36,
abuseI LOVED IT! FABTASTICAL JOB!
Dancing through the Storm
2008-05-17
ch 36,
abuseOMG i loved this story! it was amazing! normally i don't like stories set in season 1 (no toph D:) but this was really really great
Myah
2008-05-11
ch 36,
abuse...and I'm finished. I was referred to this story yesterday night, and just couldn't stop reading till i finished it. This is exellent work. Only one typo I remember- and i'd have told you about it when i noticed it, but i was too focused on what happened next. now i can't remember where it was. i went to bed close to two in the morning thanks to your incredible story. I hope you're happy- I know I am!

Love how you forced Katara and Zuko to remain chaste till their wedding night- not many writers do that, and I loved it. Also love Sokka's reactions- and Iroh appearance. and the ginseng tea reference. NOW i remember how i was referred to it- the person who did a ginseng tea fanart for you on deviantart recommended it. She was right- it's one of the best fanfics out there. Now moving on to Dangerous drabbles... and I hope you keep writing about the gaang. You do it so well.
Inazuma Akai
2008-05-08
ch 36,
abuseThis was definitely epic. At first the change in perspective bothered me but I grew to enjoy it. If a sequel is in the works, I will most certainly read and review!
Logrus Mage
2008-03-30
ch 36,
abuseI enjoyed it. Sokka's character was a bit over the top and Zuko's change came a bit to quickly, but otherwise it was great.

Your writing style is above average, and I'm sure you've devloped it even more since finishing this.

One major gripe... Zula = Azula. bugged the hell out of me.
Sevkitty
2008-03-30
ch 36,
abuseHey, it's been a while since you finished this fic...what, 2 years now? I just read the whole thing through the other day, and I've got to say it's one of the best stories I've ever had the privilege to read. It wasn't just the awesome writing that made it great (you've got some obvious skill in that area!), but also the fact that you portrayed your Christian values every paragraph of the way. I can't tell you how much I admire that, and how much of a joy that gave me to read! I'm so glad you're courageous enough to speak out like that, and I'm sure you've warmed God's heart just as much as you have mine.
poornmiserable
2008-03-30
ch 36,
abusewow this truly was an awesome fic great job on this you are so very talented and this story will for sure go up on my fav list your rock!
Cherrysinger
2008-03-24
ch 9,
abuseYour writing is, for lack of a better word, pretty x)
Cherrysinger
2008-03-24
ch 6,
abuseI'm not religious, but you could say I hold a whole mesh of values, not just from Christianity but derived from my own experiences, influences around me, and other religions I guess. So, I love how they waited until their wedding night. A very believable story, and very sweet x)
Cherrysinger
2008-03-24
ch 2,
abuseI stepped back, defiantly not ready to see the Fire Prince nude.

Did you mean 'definitely'?
amtrec
2008-03-16
ch 36,
abusewow...I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!
it's awsome! your a great writer. anywho, can u read my story and see if there is anything wrong with it? troubled love. it's in progress, but i want someone who can write well read over it and see if it's good enough. if not, tell me what to write about to spice it up a little or something. im gonna read ur drabbles now, so bye!

still loving the story!!
Infinite101
2008-02-29
ch 36,
abuseThis story is utterly amazing, it's definitely the best Zutara fic i've ever read and i'm not even exagerating,
I re-read a few chapters today, i'm tempted to just read the whole thing all over again- if i do it'll be like the second or third time i've done so- it just shows how brilliant it is;
you're a great writer, normally i wouldn't read really long fics, but this one kept me hooked throughout, you have that unique capability to capture the readers early on and just keep them hooked 'till the end,
wishing you the best of luck, in all of your other pieces of writing, fan fics and/or anything else you descide to write =)
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