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| fantasyinmymind 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseNice story. Interesting perspective. Is there a part II? |
| chickenwriter 2007-07-23 ch 2, | abuseAw...I like THIS Rupert! The nice one, who loves Clarisse. But not like that, because she belongs to Joe. |
| Captain Weirdo 2007-03-19 ch 5, | abuseThis is an incredible story. You have set such a wonderful mood and your treatment of the characters is outstanding. Bravo! |
| eac-dudette 2007-02-13 ch 5, | abuseaw this is a fantastic story!! i didn't know you wrote PD and TSOM ... i just remember reading your CSI stuff but this is all so great! |
| Prettycrazy 2006-02-01 ch 5, | abuseOH NO YOU CAN'T "END" IT HERE! Oh my oh my love it even more now! Everything in this story feels like something that I've truely seen. You are amazing! |
| nofearonlylove 2006-01-27 ch 5, | abuseOh my goodness. Such a sad way to end it. Will they ever be able to just BE...together? Sigh. I love it! You have done a fabulous job...so happy to know there is a part 2 coming up! CANNOT WAIT! |
| RevSue 2006-01-27 ch 5, | abuseThank you for this wonderful story ... I love all the details, but I'm starting to be worried that things aren't going to work out the way *I* think they should! LOL Great job, in my opinion!! |
| aserene 2006-01-27 ch 5, | abuseI love this!! I can't wait for more!! Please update soon! I'm rather surpised that they stopped but, I guess i shouldn't be... |
| mainer2121 2006-01-27 ch 5, | abuseI am really enjoying this story a great deal. Poor C&J - you just feel so sorry for them here. To so quickly go from having a great night to walking away a bit from each other. Looking forward to Part II. Sue |
| nofearonlylove 2006-01-07 ch 4, | abuseI adore this story! I cannot wait to see what unfolds. :squee: AH! Ok sorry...needed to have a little fit. Teehee. Don't make us wait too long for the next part! It's wonderful! Clarisse and Joe, the conflict and the sexual tension...AH I love it! |
| Prettycrazy 2006-01-07 ch 4, | abuseTHIS IS AMAZING! WOW! I can't wait for more, and please don't let us wait this long again! |
| crtjester 2006-01-06 ch 4, | abuseThis is really good, and I am enjoying it immensely. laura |
| jjmlucky13 2006-01-06 ch 4, | abuseThis is fantastic, I love the spanish too! Joe is such a romantic, I hope you treat us with a romantic rendevous! |
| mainer2121 2006-01-06 ch 4, | abusegreat chapter - I love how you are showing all the characters here and their relationships with each other. I can't wait for more. |
| aserene 2006-01-06 ch 4, | abuseI love it!! i can't wait for more!! I really like the portrayl of Rupertr in this one! Update soon! |