 Jeff 12/7/05 . chapter 2 A very intriguing and compelling story! I like some of the explanation of the meta-physical realities between the different dimensions. The interplay between Alexander and Willow at the end is fascinating.
Here and there are some confusing sentences which can make it difficult to follow. Although your English writing skills are generally excellent, I think it would be a good idea to find a beta reader whose first language is English. |