please continue this!

No killing off small children! Bad!

i know you haven't worked on this in a long time...but id really like it if you finsished this!! youve got a great story going, and its only the first chapter!

You know what? This seems like a really good story so far. I can see that you haven't updated it in quite a while, But I'm Alerting this story and hoping that you will continue! :)

more more!! major cliff hanger! what happens to the little girl?Please update soon!

pretty good start:)
just rememeber a child that is four isnt so easily talked into talking with strangers, they are more apt to shying away and not so bold. but you have gotten it down in a really organized way and it was easy to read

Oh no! poor girl.

I loved it is there more

Ahh, no more updates! I understand. It was a really great story. Liked seeing this side of Ziva!

For the love of cheese please update!

My gosh! You can't just leave me hanging like that! Come on!

woah intense moment!
i likey the tiva-ish hint.
this could be a episode.

love it more please

hey cool story so far

OMG! Really good, but please get some tiva in soon! Please continue