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| Hell-of-Fire 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abusewhat a great ending :D I was nearly LMAO, really really enjoyed this story! You have one hell of a talent there! Definetely one of my fav stories! Thanks for writing it! |
| greensleeves104 2005-12-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this one too! Here's my favorite bit: "He looked into her face, a thousand unspoken questions in both sets of eyes, and searched for some sign that he could continue... They stood and embraced, kissing like teenagers until they were convinced the other knew the depth of their feelings." This is such fun to imagine happening after Hand of god. And I love your ending. Whoops! tee-hee. |
| mick 2005-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abusewow that was so hot!! loved how it ended with the petty officer coming in. great fic |
| Tracyj23 2005-12-06 ch 1, | abuseHot and beautiful! Loved it! That was great - I imagine sex between them would be exactly like that. (love to see it of course... not that we ever will ...) Great story - I really enjoyed it. :) |