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| ASlaveToWords 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseT_T That's like the saddestt thing i've ever read!! Please do a seuil or something!! Poor Yusuke! They obviously love each other! T_T |
| sesshy's numba1 gurl 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseawe yusuke. I thought it was cute and i liked it alot. |
| kazumigirl 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseGah! Your stories are so wonderful! |
| Kryssi 1990 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseLove this story, and I love reading all of ur stories, they are excellent. Hope to read more, very soon. |
| Lady Niona 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abusePlease, please either continue this story or make a sequel of this PLEASE! I wanna know what the message is!! |
| Ryuuie Mizishi 2006-08-21 ch 1, | abuseWaugh! It was so cute toward the end... Sorry this is brief, but I liked it, and every cliche review thing you can think of could be inserted right here. :3 |
| Moth Gypsy 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet! ^^ the ending kinda left me wantin more, like a sequel would be nice, but at the same time, it actualy invoked alot of feeling in me. like it was really diferent from normal yaoi, so points for that. At first I dint liek the way you portrayed Kurama, cuz normaly i like him. BUT after I finished readin the story I decided that I actualy liked the way you wrote him ( i know, make up my mind) cuz you actualy explained his atitude and it made sense. So ya, to wrap it up, I really liked it, its a nice change from all the dull monotone yaoi fics im used ta readin! ^_^ |
| Ruka Jaganshi 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abuseAw, it was so romantic! I really hoped it would be a happy end, so I am a bit disappointed now, but hey, the quality of a story does not depend on the ending. Write more of this nice pairing! Kurama was quite rude, ne? XD Did he really say those things not because he is evil but because it is a habit in the demon world? |
| yllom21 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting story, although the ending was a bit confusing. Nice choice of pairing and excellent writing style. |
| Syngamy 2005-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI just can't see Kurama being that rude to ANYONE, let alone Hiei :/ |
| Demon Hiei's Girl 2005-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI almost cried! .< But the ending was so...how do you say, cliffhanger-ish but also...perfect in it's own weird way. My cold basement was the perfect climate for this story too. I was shivering with Yusuke. haha GREAT job! |
| Seto'segyptianluvr 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuseAnother beautiful piece of work Zelia. |
| Nyte Kit 2005-12-07 ch 1, | abusehuh. interesting. i wasn't expecting this to be a one-shot, but it was nice nonetheless. you enjoy writing stories where Kurama and Hiei are at odds, don't you? i've noticed that in many of your stories, more prominently Black Suicide. still, this story was nice. cute ending, too, though it wasn't a happy one. but we all know those are only for fairy tales, as the saying goes. great job. update one of your stories next please! |
| YuYuFanatic14(nli) 2005-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved your story. It was really cute. The ending was pretty good, and I realized none of them ever have their father mentioned in the show. Creepy. Great story! |
| kikira-chan 2005-12-06 ch 1, | abuseits okay about the end. I understand your troubles I am terrible at ending things (reviews too so expect trailing and a little smily face to close things off) I thought it was sweet. A little angst for both Yusuke and Hiei. Kurama saying something completely cruel, it is refreshing from the Kurama who spends his nights wailing about lost romances though. I liked it and I felt terrible for Hiei guilt is something I imagine he would take to the extreme and even worse for Yusuke who can't convince Hiei that it is not his fault (sorta). A little sad but overall good not quite wrench out your heart and stomp it flat but it did tug on the heartstrings. Since you gave permission, why haven't you been updating? If it's something personal I and hopefully others would understand but you mentioned it and I have missed your YxH fics. The pairing seems to have gained more popularity. (hopefully taking some people away from mary-sues and OC pairings) I was reading one the other day and thought of yours. You write some of my favorite YxH stories. See how I don't know how to end this review? -dead serious- I don't! I'll just tell you it was wonderful and I sound terrible in this review. I liked it a lot! |