I kinda don't get it...

poor yusuke! do something Zelia don't leave yusuke alone! wahh!

T_T That's like the saddestt thing i've ever read!! Please do a seuil or something!! Poor Yusuke! They obviously love each other! T_T

awe yusuke. I thought it was cute and i liked it alot.

Gah! Your stories are so wonderful!

Love this story, and I love reading all of ur stories, they are excellent. Hope to read more, very soon.

Please, please either continue this story or make a sequel of this PLEASE! I wanna know what the message is!!

Waugh! It was so cute toward the end... Sorry this is brief, but I liked it, and every cliche review thing you can think of could be inserted right here. :3

That was sweet! ^^ the ending kinda left me wantin more, like a sequel would be nice, but at the same time, it actualy invoked alot of feeling in me. like it was really diferent from normal yaoi, so points for that. At first I dint liek the way you portrayed Kurama, cuz normaly i like him. BUT after I finished readin the story I decided that I actualy liked the way you wrote him ( i know, make up my mind) cuz you actualy explained his atitude and it made sense. So ya, to wrap it up, I really liked it, its a nice change from all the dull monotone yaoi fics im used ta readin! ^_^

Aw, it was so romantic! I really hoped it would be a happy end, so I am a bit disappointed now, but hey, the quality of a story does not depend on the ending. Write more of this nice pairing! Kurama was quite rude, ne? XD Did he really say those things not because he is evil but because it is a habit in the demon world?

Very interesting story, although the ending was a bit confusing. Nice choice of pairing and excellent writing style.

I just can't see Kurama being that rude to ANYONE, let alone Hiei :/

I almost cried! .< But the ending was so...how do you say, cliffhanger-ish but also...perfect in it's own weird way. My cold basement was the perfect climate for this story too. I was shivering with Yusuke. haha GREAT job!

Another beautiful piece of work Zelia.

huh. interesting. i wasn't expecting this to be a one-shot, but it was nice nonetheless. you enjoy writing stories where Kurama and Hiei are at odds, don't you? i've noticed that in many of your stories, more prominently Black Suicide. still, this story was nice. cute ending, too, though it wasn't a happy one. but we all know those are only for fairy tales, as the saying goes. great job. update one of your stories next please!