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USUI HOROKEU FAN
2006-07-20 . chapter 1
THAT WAS SO CUTE! IT WAS THE BEST REN X HORO POEM THAT I HAVE EVER READ! I REALLY ENJOYED IT. PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE SOME MORE. IT WAS GREAT!
MeRamoManea93
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
Theese are the best HoroRen poems i`ve ever read...I like HoroRen coupling too so if you want to talk my messenger id is me a mail to confirm if you want to talk with me ! KEEP IT GOING !
Princess-Aurion
2005-12-19 . chapter 1
I always knew you were better at this than me buddy ~_^
Hahaha, I love the line: 'I always hated your childish ways, The way you slept late for most of your days' as it reminds me of myself XD

Awesome stuff dude~!
DayDrEaMiNg-child
2005-12-13 . chapter 2
nice job, i think. the second and last stanza were my favorites. will be waiting for Horos pov.
and thank you so much for the advertisment of "Kimi Dake", greatly appreciated!
Yasmia
2005-12-12 . chapter 2
I don't really know what to say. Cute and sweet don't even sum it up. it was absolutely fantastic! Keep up the good work.
Yamada
2005-12-10 . chapter 2
What I find funny about these is that you write better than me at 1:30am than I do in the day! XD
Seriously these are freaking awesome, they really capture how Ren feels perfectly!
You are an expert with these dude!
Keep up the great work!
DayDrEaMiNg-child
2005-12-08 . chapter 1
cute, very cute. in character too, i like this. more would be interesting, maybe one of how they miss each other when Rens in China and Horo is in Hokkaido. just an idea, just like u wanted
AmePiper
2005-12-06 . chapter 1
Hey, I say if thats how good your writing is at 2am then bring on the music baby, your one hell of a poet!
Nicely writen lol.

**#squiz#**
isisisa
2005-12-06 . chapter 1
D'aw! =)
tat's some good poetry!
Yamada
2005-12-06 . chapter 1
Geez...You can turn your hand to anything huh?
They were fantastic, each poem grasped the thoughts of both Ren and Horo and put them down perfectly...They were simply divine.
You should go for more poetry, because judging from these, you are damned awesome at doing them!
Well done Lysha!
Keep it up!
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