I liked it! I hope you will write more!

Unbelievable... that's so funny! How did Kadaj and his brothers get there, though? Ah well. I love them.

And the "slash cell phone" bit was hilarious! Those dirty, dirty boys... *giggle*

Keep writing!

I thought this was really good. You handle the characters in a good way and I wish there was more. y inner fangirl is sqeauling with glee right now. Please update soon.