Reviews for Sundered Souls

Reviews For: Sundered Souls - Reviews: Page 1 of 10

Honest Beauty 2008-10-05 ch 10,	abuseOh i loved it! the owl series was a good one, and i have read and continue to read and worship all of the valedamar series (barring the two short sotries books, haven't had a chance to read them yet.) in fact just above my head rests owlkinght on a shelf. but enough of how much i adore mercedes lackey's books (and not just her velgarth world series) this was a surperbly well writen story. but what was the rash about? u never did explain. did that bastard brenn(kudo y the way for writing such a wonderfully awful villian, as an author i truly am impressed) have a hand in it? was that what made the alder's crack or what? and what did brenn do to keisha initialy that night she first met him? love the ending, and very realistic recovery and reactions. aww they're married! FINALLY! lol took them long enough ^.^ ok i'll stop talking ur ear of now. once again good job! ja ne! Bea
Wynjara 2008-03-06 ch 10,	abuseWoohoo, Valdemar fanfic! happy sigh And angsty too! I think I may love you a little.
Calciber 2007-09-05 ch 10,	abusethis story was unbelieveable, i am reading Owlsight for the second time and am still loving it. i have also read Black Gryphon, Silver Gryphon and White Gryphon...very good books by the same author. i hope you continue this story and soon...awsome writer and i think you really stuck to the character's personality, especially Darian, the other Tayledras, and Kelvren. what Keisha's mom did to her, was something i could expect from the way that she is viewed in the books. well got to go, hope you continue the story. cya sista.
Aramelor 2007-04-12 ch 10,	abuseHoly eugoogly batman! ... I do appologize about that, I tend to get a little ecstatic when I finish a good story. Always happens when I finish one of ML's books. Anyhoo... this is the first of your fanfic's that I've read, and all I have to say is wow... just wow... The darker theme is just fantastic. And the ooc-ness of Keisha's parents was great. The only thing that could be more satisfactory would have been if Darian had not shot Brenn with a crossbow, but had completely and utterly annhilate him to a tiny pile of ash. Yeah... happy thought's. And sorry about the lengthy review, but it had to be done ya know.
TheDreamerLady 2006-04-15 ch 10,	abuseWell... I know your probably wrote this story a long time ago, and I don't know if your still writing, or even still using the same email, or even if you'll ever know if I reviewed... but I still had too. I liked this story. It was dark, it was sad, it was amazing. The only thing that needs to be changed is the Darian's Eleke... he doesn't live in a tree, but in a little underground cabin type thing... Anyway, I felt that I should be your 135 reveiwer... Hope to read more of your stuff in the near future! amanda and Lanco(the duck)
DBZAddict 2006-02-14 ch 10,	abuseI must say, I have never hated any character quite so much as I do your Sidonie Alder, Ayver falls a close second. Brenn came only after that because he was a bastard from the start while her parents were onece supposedly good people who betrayed her. You wrote it well though. I am terrible at writing anything too horrifying or abusive, emotionally or physically, so I congratulate you on capturing the evil in writing.
BlueTragedy 2005-10-22 ch 1,	abusehave to get off so can't give tips but wil later
faeriesinger 2005-07-24 ch 10,	abuseWow. I really liked that. The Adlers didn't act like their book selves, so I'd classify it as AU, but definately a good story. I fuly intend to read more of your work as I come across it.
MaisjetadoreSiriusNoir 2005-06-25 ch 1,	abuseI like this alot. This is the first ML fic i've read...I just finished the Owl Trilogy last night...Great story there. Well...I am off to swim. I hope this story keeps up! I like it! (btw, very charming writing style, almost sounds like the ML/LD narration)
Death Phoenix 2005-04-12 ch 1,	abuseGood so far!!
mimi 2005-03-26 ch 6, anon.	abusei think your a genius and but i hope the u let devan save er becuase it wold be extremely wrong if u didnt!
moonlightrider 2005-01-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice job on your story - I like the poetry/titles! I can't comment on your accuracy, having not read Misty for years, but even without being a rabid Misty fan you managed to keep me interested. Keisha's parents sounded far more ANGRY rather than too-stubborn-to-do-what's-best-for-their-daughter, which is how I saw the story going the whole time - you might want to change something. I don't know, maybe I just wasn't expecting it, but I got the impression that they were just really misguided, not so... mean. That's not the right word, but I hope you know what I mean. You can throw it either way, but I think (IMHO) that it would be better with that editing. On a slightly more positive note: nice dialogue (something I always struggle with), and any grammatical mistakes or awkwardness there was wasn't noticeable on the whole. You're a great writer, and I hope you'll do more.
PandaSong 2004-08-16 ch 10,	abuseAw! ;-; so cute! I'm glad I picked this one to read, it was amazing! ^^; I didn't quite like how her parents were, but they were so out of character that it was ok.
Queen's Own 2004-02-14 ch 10,	abusei see a pattern. it's a good pattern, one I like too. good fic. i'm on my way to read some of your other stuff. Zhai'helleva! -Queen's Own
Queen's Own 2004-02-14 ch 6,	abuseyou did surprise me. sorry for reviewing again, but i REALLy like this fic. really quick, i think Errold's Grove and k'Valdemar are a bit farther out then you make them... anyway, great fic. Zhai'helleva! -Queen's Own

Return to Top