PLEASE UPDATE! I KNOW IT'S BEEN A LLONG TIME, BUT PLEASE!?(T.T)

This story hasn't been updated in so long, so I assume my review wouldn't really matter, but I'd really like to share my opinion.

I was glad to see you fixed the spelling of 'Ester' to 'Esther' at some point and am slightly disappointed that you haven’t updated. Right at the best part! Esther could take care of Ion and so many cute things could happen! Don't stop, what's the use of starting something and not finishing it?

So what, there were some mistakes but I don't care and if most of the people read this fare, they mustn't care either. However, the Japanese phrases every now and again could be left out since the show isn't in Japan. Nevertheless, they're just minor irritations that aren’t important. In addition, this is your story so you should do as you wish.

Just don't give up, please? This story deserves an ending, all stories do.

Oh do update this story you keep everyone so well IC as you can I hope to see more updates before the new year or afterward you have such a good talent in writing I hope to see this update ASAP.

Good work (^^)

~smcandy~

So far so good, you seem to have done well despite English not being your first language and all continue good work


~smcandy~

Please, when are you going to update? you are kill me, please! keep going_! I love this fic! please going! see ya!

WAH! -shakes by shoulders-

WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED! GAH!

No!

I will be most depressed if you are not to update. PLEASE do so soon =(

~Tamashii

That was awesome! I loved it~! I really can't wait to see what happens!! Update soon Please!!

Very enjoyable and pretty impressive considering English is a secondary language. I look forward to reading the rest of this when you finish.

this story rocks so hard i cant believe it you have to wright more there are hardly esther/ion storys

YEAH!

This is a very good story(added to fav) but I would like it if you could update soon, cause I really think it's a good story!

Hello. First of all, I'd like to say that this story is very good. It's well written and really descriptive. The fact that it's IonxEsther makes it even better. However, I have some constructive criticism.

Occasionally, it's a bit TOO descriptive, and it gets a little boring. Also, the dialogue is slightly awkward from time to time, so you might want to work on that.

Second, there’s the overabundance of Japanese phrases. Um, Trinity Blood takes place in ITALY. None of the characters are native Japanese speakers. Just because a series is made in Japan, that doesn't mean it takes place in Japan.

Some Italian phrases thrown in the writing would be fine, but the fangirl Japanese is unnecessary, distracting, and frankly, very annoying. You've already shown that you know the English forms of these words in your translations, so PLEASE use the English from now on. This fanfiction is, after all, supposed to be written in English.

I'm sorry if I seem a little rude, but this kind of thing just really bugs me.

its a beautiful story probubly the best in fanficiton net i admire you continue the story thanks

continue dammit! or i'll hound you at deviant *mwahahahaha* ... ahahahahahaa!

Yeah keep going I'm awaiting the next chapter with bated breath