what.. MORE marafujicest?

has EVERYBODY crossed over to the dark side or what? _

*sigh..* oh well, if you have to have trends, they might as well be good ones, eh?

awesome work, too bad we missed this supposed "last night". LOL

i love this story.

i love your painting.

i love you.

well.. ehh, you know what i mean.

Wow, this has got to be one of the creepiest stories I have ever read...I like it! So Origional and emotional, it's even got libido! Hahahahaha! Nice work!

Ohh good

thats...thats... not what i expected, but it's still awsome as ever! keep it up

oh...this is getting god...

WHAT? *drops dead of shock* yugi wanted them dead? why?

haa, just kidding. that's still pretty cool, though. this is really good. way to build up the suspense!

aw...so cute

Short but o so sweet

I'm really liking this, and don't worry about the shortness.

Barely any mistakes, and can Zane come back in soon? Sorry, but the truesdale bros are my fav characters in YGOGX. So, happy writings my friend!

JoeyWheelersOnlySanFangal

Hm... I say that it's good. But the previous chapter is very good.

... i love this story. it's so cute! n.n and you updated like as soon as i read the second chapter!... but i hate the ending... it was confuseing... so is jaden a vampire or not? keep up the good work!

*_* UPDATE! I like it!

I couldn't read the second chapter, but that was sad. I love Syrus! He's so cute! But good story. I love it when they're sad like that!

Wow, you got start to the point in this one chapter. Wonder where it will go, continue soon!