 rosa lunae 10/25/04 . chapter 1This is very fascinating... it's a shame it was discontinued. I enjoy your insight into Tsukikage no Knight's character; he's an intriguing idea. But I have no idea why you made Prince Endymion evil... however, it does make for an interesting plot line. If you ever continue, I'll surely read it. |
 Stefanie2 8/23/03 . chapter 1Dammit, what is with you and all these half-finished stories! *sighs* Oh well, the show must go on! *off to read more stories* I'm sure I'll find something else to amuse me! Great job, INTERESTING concept to say the least. |
 Rashaka should be signed 11/9/01 . chapter 1 I adore this. This is simply a wonderful take on Darien/Endmyion/Moonlight Knight. I never thought the prince was evil, but I always suspected he was much more dark than Darien/Mamoru, and much more bad-ass. Not evil really, but *ruthless*- in protecting his love and protecting Earth. I always kinda thought he would either get along well with Queen Serenity, or they would hate eachother, because I sense that the former Queen was also a lot harder than her daughter Princess Serenity (the paragon of innocence and purity). It's interesting to see the knight and Endymion dancing around eachother in this, and I LOVED the line at the end, "Seems I'm already rubbing off on you." It was sweet how the Moonlight Knight verbally protected Usagi in this, even though he had no sense of self, no ability to explain why he would do so. You know what I also thought was intesresting but I don't was mentioned here-was how for a long time Tuxedo Mask was much like the Moonlight Knight in that he wasn't aware of himself, and Darien wasn't aware of his other half, and aware that they were one and the same, until near the end of the first season. If you ever write another part to this, make you could talk about that. My favorite part of this was how in the end the roses met and were red for a moment. Kind of like saying that it wasn't until this lifetime that Darien/Mamoru got it right. |