This made me chuckle. It would have made me laugh except that I have a cold thing and whenever I laugh I go into a coughing fit. So consider it as having been laugh-inducing.

Land war in Asia-ha! And Snow White, Sleeping Beauty, Wizard of Oz, Mary Sue, and blackbird pies. o_O If the Queen was forever eating bread and honey, I would definitely say that was the song, but as it is I'm not sure.

Apparently there used to be a Princess Bride line here, though. *pouts* Where'd it go?

Let's see. I found Princess Bride, Snow White, Wizard of Oz (Where the wicked witch of the east was crushed by a house), Lord of the Rings, and I believe I found the nursery rhyme "Four and Twenty blackbirds" in there too. Well done.

Haha! I like the ending. Not at all what I was expecting, either. Normally I don't like 'unhappy' endings, but this was highly amusing.

Cheers, and keep writing!

ROFL! I love the Princess Bride semi-quotes. I think that's my favourite movie ever. And this is hilarious:

"The Princess was, at that stage, not the world’s most beautiful woman, but she was very close up there. She stood at rank twelve, but when she laughed as she looked out her window, her rank rose, for the laugh had made her all the more beautiful. She then stood as the world’s seventh most beautiful woman in the world."

Tee hee.

I am very much enjoying this story.

HAHA! Loved the ending. Was the stepping thing a reference to LOTR? If so, GO ME! If not, oh dear...i feel a bit spotty.. loved the princess bride references though!

Haha, this is good. Land war in Asia...

Being a king, I don't think Cecil (Cecil?)knows what management skills are!

Cute fic...but I love it for the Princess Bride reference!

PS: Read the book if you haven't already, it's way more cynical and sophisticated than the movie!

XD nice ending. a little bit too much princess bride in there (your original voice is better, i think), but really funny and great :D

HAHAHAHA. i haven't actually finished the first chapter, but i got to the princess bride reference and i thought you'd want to know that i just about died laughing. so refreshing and unexpected XD on to the next chapter!

You have read The Princess Bride. (Not seen the movie, but accually read the book!) This was a great fic! And I love the end. Lol!