Beautiful.

Bit too short for my liking. I'm disappointed, my lady ;) XDXDXD

But that doesn't matter because the adorable-ness makes up for it :)

I love the "I cried with him." bit, that was just fantastic.

It's absolutely beautiful.

It's so sad and yet so sweet.
Good job :).

I think this is a perfect representation of what happened during the game and it makes me sad to remember how she died and how if affected the entire party.

I would recommend adding to this story because you have a great sense of detail that makes your writing very fun to read. Please post more!

Wow great story, it really captures how everyone was feeling during that traumatic event...*sniff*