interesting story though it SHOULD be rated a little higher to bad they have nothing between T and M

This chapter does a fairly good job of rounding out the story. Honestly, there were several moments when I had the "anime style sweatdrop" type of thing, and it tapdanced all over boarderline "too creepy to keep reading", but all in all I think you did a very nice job with this story, and it was easily worth the time it took to read it, fivefold.

Things I was especially fond of: The level of distaste Megaman had for Blackfire's kisses (that was quite entertaining), the peacefully slow pace you took Lan and Mayl's relationship (so many fics rush into stuff, and then there's no tension for the rest of the story, just 'happy'), and the decent character development (the characters actually changed throughout the story. That was a nice touch).

Things I didn't really like: The rushed feeling of the 'epilogue' (After the main part of the action is resolved, the story just kinda disolves itself in 3 lines, giving mild closure), and... well, I already mentioned the kinda creepy. It was sort of a nice touch, to show how creepy Jerry (I think her name is actually spelled Jeri) was, but... it sent shudders down my spine.

Anyway, good job.

Aw!
So cute!

funny chapter

The story was great, but next time come up with a name other than Blackfire

Awesome story. I never liked Digmon and Teen Titans, so I got my moneys worth!
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Wait, this is a public story? As in no need to pay? DARN THOSE SCALPERS! XD

O.O...omg! I loved it!! Awsome job! :D I loved the plot!

OBESSED MUCH!!?!??! =O!!
DAMN!
MAYLU KICK JERRY'S ASS!! GET WITH LAN!!
ROLL BEAT THE CRAP OUTTA BLACKFIRE! HELLO!?! GET WITH MEGAMAN! HE'S YOURS!

holy shimmata

OMG! This was GREAT! You had me clinging to the edge of my seat in suspense! Serves Jerry right for what she did! Yeah!
This story was AWSOME! (Applause)

*APPLAUDES* Girl, that was a great story. :) The ending was just beautiful. *applaudes again* Very beautiful. :) You did a great job on this. :) That Jerry bitch got what she deserved, going after May's man. what was she thinking? Oh well, she got what she had coming to her. :) Great story. :)

Oh I just wrote a song fic. If and when you have a moment, please check it out and tell me what you think. :)

Talk to you later,

Alisi T. :)

OH! OH! OH MY GOD! BLACKFIRE TRIED TO WHAT?
Ohh... the suspense, the agony, the... ABSOLUTE HORROR THAT BLACKFIRE TRIED TO...
You're right, I'm going to read the rest of this when you post again

Hey DS17. :) Great chapter 6. :) Jerry is really going over the edge now. I hope May stops her in time before it gets out of hand.

Update soon. :)

Alisi T.

Please write more or I will send the evil waffels after you!(People run screaming)Be afraid be very afraid!(evil laugh).
R&R soon

O... The suspense! seriously! I'm not kidding! I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm adding this to my fav. stories list!