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| MeadowLark4491 2006-03-13 ch 32, anon. | abuseWow. I like these stories a lot. As a suggestion, you put the German translations at the end of the story, it might be easier for you readers if they were at the bottom of the page. |
| Darlin 2006-01-28 ch 3,  | abuseI’ve no idea who Kassandra is though I suppose if I read previous stories I might. She seems a little Mary Sueish, no offense as the story is quite interesting. It’s a little disconcerting not knowing what they’re saying in German though I can figure out the gist of it mostly with the next sentence more or less. Overall this is very well written. I must mention that Europeans generally eat left handed so they never switch hands when cutting meat so I’d think Kassandra wouldn’t have had any problems at all. I mention this because you seem quite knowledgeable about German and thought you might want to know this. I hope you don’t mind me offering my two cents; it is in no way meant to be snide. My last comment is that I think since this is a Kurt story you might want to mention that in your summary. If Kurt fans are aware this is out here it may help you get more reviews, which you really deserve. |