Wow, this is amazing! I was reading an introduction page on forums and Cupid-Painted-Blind suggested this poem. It's absolutely beautiful! Great job =)

I'm not a big poetry fan, but ... wow. This is amazing, you've captured Andromeda perfectly, and this just flows through your head like a song and it's beautiful.

Yeah. I'm amazed.

Cuba

I read this off a link on TheOriginalHufflepuff's homepage. She is right, it is a very good portrayal of Andromeda and it flows really well.

This is beautiful...the last line has such an impact on it

Pretty, detailed, clear :)
Well not really clear, but unclear - in a good way.
...I don't get myself :(
ohwell.
Cheers!
a.N

Er, wow... I love the rhyming! It actually rhymes too; IMO things have to rhyme, or not rhyme, not somewhere in between. This rhymed. ^_^ Beautiful poetry!

I'm really in awe here...this is beautiful. I'm usually not a huge poetry person, but this really is beautiful, there are no other words for it.

Even though it's short, Andromeda really shines through here, we see a very clear portrayal of her character through this poem, and your word choice is lovely here - it's vibrant and extremely haunting.

:O.
This owns, it's so beautiful, and a wonderful character sketch!

This is simply stunning work. The repitition of the italicized words and the change from quickly to slowly which paints such a wonderful picture in the change in herself. The last stanza is pure brilliance. I am awe-struck by how beautifully crafted this poem is.

This poem was recommended to me by cupid-painted-blind at my forum which is dedicated to outstanding character sketches, I would love for you to check it out!

- Frayed x

A night insight into Andromeda's mind. I liked the last line, very chilling.

Wow. That was brilliant, even though I usually don't read poetry. I particularly loved this stanza:

How slow she is to answer
When he asks if she's a dancer
(She remembers ballroom steps
Oh, those known unknown regrets)

It was so wonderful, not enough is written about the Black family. The whole thing was beautifully done.

So, I found this story and favorited it about fifty years ago, and just now realized that I didn't review it. Which is a sin.

I love the Black family, Andromeda in particular, and even though I don't really read poetry, or even like it very much, this was beautiful. Absolutely stunning. I love the repetition of "out of my mind" and that ending!

This is one of those rare stories that leaves me breathless. This is what writing is supposed to look like.

Congratulations, and don't you dare blame this on anything.

That was lovely like practically everything else you have writen. I must say I really enjoy- of course the last line (haunting)

-this stanza:
How quickly she denies
Fleeting sadness in her eyes,
How quick she is to say she does not care, she does not care.

-this stanza:
How slow she shakes her head,
And leaves the rest unsaid,
She refuses to admit that she has felt a moment's grief.

-and the repition.

That was beautiful and I love that it is on Andromeda. I need to find more on these (very!) minor charecters.

Lovely like always.

-Frozen-Passion-

Not one of your best pieces, but obviously good in its own right.

That last line was really powerful, and the repetition hit it home.

I thought it was fantastic.

I really liked the kind of repetitive style.