The way you've written this... now makes me think of adding this pairing to my favourite yuri list.

Yes, it's that good. _

So sweet, I loved it! This story has that something, what touches me from deeb. Sadness and joy, and something soft. I really hope you are going to continue this story.

I've been reeding this story for a couple of days, and i must say that I LOVE IT! the only thing i can't figure out is why does it only have three reviews? thats fucked up. Anyway i love your story, please keep up the good work.

sorry i have not updated i got grounded from my pc.

this is great. chap. 4 is prety funny please update soon.

ps. is martel going to die like in the anime?

pss.i hope not that was sader then when ed died.

ps.*sniffle*

Wow, this is really good. I love this paring and you're writing it very well. I'm just confused because Riza hasn't had any interaction with Martel on AdultSwim yet, so I don't know if this is AU or not... _" Keep going with it though!

I saw in your profile that you wrote Photographs too. Very good as well; I would have reviewed but I don't have an LJ account.

thats the sweetist thing i have ever read. you got some major talent:) please make another one like this:] or else hahahahaha.