I thought it was pretty good. Have any other SO3 stuff?

Well, this is certainly interesting...cross-breeding is sort of nice at that...I mean like humanoids, who are like humans...not human and shlimey creatures, -shudders-.

Anyways, this is nice and would love if you continued...

Just a thought, with your experience at writing lemons, have you ever considered doing Fayt/Nel/Mirage? It WAS hinted on the previous chapter, but then again, it's your story...

not that i am in any position to tell, but perhaps you've forgotten about this story or simply chos eto abandon it.

i rather liked it, and would like a close, or at least a continuation.

thank you,

Psyraptor

hell yeah, fayt/mirage..kick ass. I've always looked for a fic where they're a couple. i read your ti/lu fics for ffx..thoe were awesome as well. Would you ever consider doing a fayt/nel fic or oneshot?

Mirage and Fayt.

I always thought the older, hot Klausian woman would be good for him. Mirage could be made a very happy woman by Fayt. Especially since she usually gets stuck with Cliff. She probably likes 'em younger anyway.

lol cooleo man nvm read a Star Ocean ff lol im a Kim Possible fan but ive played the gaem though im stuck on the first disk plus i lost my memery card so i cant go any further lol well keep up the good work

Hey I wonder whats the regular couple to have with cliff. well anyway its pretty good lemon on fayt/mirage.

update if you can

First of all, I must applaud you on actually doing something with the Fayt/Mirage ending. I myself have entertained thoughts of it as well, but I won't publish anything else SO-related until Divine Wrath is going again.

ANYWAY, before I go off on a tangent, let's commence with this here review: I think it's pretty well-written for the most part (a few sentences could have been done better). You do however, stand to invoke the canon-monster in every SO fan who reads it, with your portrayal of characters being far more sexually driven than the game ever came anywhere close to painting them as, but since this story is months old already, I'm sure you already know that.

I think you did it pretty well (although you lack a tad of development, since the characters seem to just change the MOMENT you transition from the game's script to your own writing). In that, I think you would have been slightly better off not including the material of the Fayt/Mirage ending, since it would allow for the assumption that the characters have changed in the time between the last time you see them in the ending, and the beginning of your story.

Of course, without it, you would have no BASIS for the story, so...I dunno how you would go about solving that problem. By doing what you did, most likely: just doing what you wanted. Since that's always going to be the most important thing.

In closing, I do have to say that I like this one more than the Albel/Romeria experiment, both for the descriptiveness, and the structuring. And the fact that I like Mirage.

Nice.

this was a nice fanfic, i never got the ending with Fayt and Mirage and this is the first fic i've seen with that pairing, i hope you will write more chapters on it cause i would love to read them.

Yay! Finally, the first ever Fayt/Mirage fic...and an M-rated one, at that! This truly is a most rare of Star Ocean: Till The End Of Time couples. Mirage fics are also rare in themselves. Cliff/Mirage is a rare couple, but Fayt/Mirage is even rarer! You won't have to worry about death threats from me, because I enjoyed the content within. Anyway, awesome one-shot on this rarest of couples!