wow just wow o_o

A great story. Very good.

Now THAT was pretty angsty and depressing. Continuous accounts of the tradegy and the refrain 'But it was beautiful here once' was a great touch.

This is a stunning work of what it must have felt to be a Padawan who escaped the Purges.

Your description of the emotions of the former Jedi and the destruction in the Temple were perfect.

My favorite line: "But it was beautiful here once..."

Love this. Absolutely love it.

It's simple, yet elegant.

Wonderful piece of writing.

I am agaog at how beautiful and amazing this is. I could see this happening. A few small ones being told they were free. How the world must have colapsed around them... It's so sad. I would love to see you do another chapter that is just their thoughts and emotions as they excape. Please?