wonderful story.

I LOVE your OC she is so original! And i really want her to get with Naruto...i hope she does! Please read my story...but i dont think it's as good as yours lol:)

COOL

Is it... -blinks- Is it OVER? -looks alarmed-

Is this the end?

!

If it is or isn't... THIS. IS. INCREDIBLE.

Finally, it was working again!

And... !

"Or were they forming chains for her to drown in sweet oblivion?"

No, no, no!!

Something funny is going on! In Chapter 11, it cuts off right at "For a moment, it seemed as thou"... NO! -sobs into pillow while hugging Gaara plushi- What is wrong with it? Why can I not keep reading?!?!

Anyway... I'm REALLY enjoying this, Rurouni-chan!! It's making me so happy :D And I really hope whatever problem this is ends soon.
-Ameko

Ah, Rurouni-chan, your writing makes me forget all my troubles. -sighs dreamily- Seriously, I sit down here to continue following the adventures of - what did you call her? - Mystery Lady, and I just dissolve into the story. I forget everything else until I pull myself out. :)

Woah. Kakashi's SCARY. :D

Love it, as always. -continues reading-
-Ameko^^

OH MY GAARA! HE'S HERE!

Oh my Gaara... I almost cried... this chapter was so sad!

"No one, if they had seen, could have told you which was the moth and which was the flame."

Rurouni-chan -
I just had to let you know that I AM reading this - because It. Is. HILARIOUS.

Oh. My. Gaara. -rolls around laughing-

I can't stop!! I have stuff to do, but I can't stop reading it! It's hysterical! :D I wish I had the dA icons to express the hilarity! I love it!!

And I cannot WAIT to keep reading. -maniacal laughter- So I end the expression of my love here. :)
-Ameko

Hey did you know that this story was the first time I met Kiba and Akamaru… pretty cool huh… I guess I should thank you for introducing me to me cuz now I’m obsessed with the pair –grabs Akamaru and runs away laughing like the crazy insane person she is-
Kiba: get back here! that’s the fith time this week you’ve kidnapped him!!
Liz: well then I would have thought you’d start to get wise to my tricks
Akamaru’s not complaining, cuz I’m feeding him bacon… yum
“And so he grinned at the girl, who gave a tired smile back, shouted something outrageously insulting to the two brooding prodigies, and walked on, whistling.” HAHAH that’s my Kiba Kun –smiles goofily and pets Akamaru-

Chapter One: The Sighting
So because I was in the mood (ah don’t you love those crazy wims) I felt like re reading this… I’ll reply to what I can :D
“Too bad with looks that perfect he was probably gay anyways.” Oh god I still love that line! –laugh-

Chapter 3: Of Misunderstandings and Crickets

TenTen became engrossed with the cricket’s plight as well.” Go Cricket! He’s hotter then Sasuke and NEJI! All the girls are cheering on his plight to get away!

“Maybe she’d been watching too much anime lately.
Nah.” HAHAH YES you can NEVER have to much anime!

Chapter Four: It’s Wallpaper, Not Wallflower
she could heave a sigh of relief and hope he’d gotten killed on a mission.” Hahah poor Sasuke she hope’s he died lol
So she hoped that he hadn’t been killed, just been seriously injured.” Oh I guess that’s ok then… maybe he broke his legs so he can’t walk.. ever again
“She’d rather take her chances with the assassins.” Haha GO her!


Chapter Five: Pink Isn’t Sasuke’s Color
“Smiling like the cat that at the cream,” or to be more presise Icedream :D
“TenTen just took pictures.”
Oh yeah. Blackmail, baby. GO TENTEN!! Blackmail is the best! Espicly when it’s on Sasuke

yay she's with naruto can't wait till you update!

Hmm... Kisame having a crush (or is it l-o-v-e?), we finally kno the girl's name, and of course, Sasuke going all dark and stuff... GIVE HIM A GIRL TOO! And seriously, i wonder wut it'll be like when Kisame and Temari start to get it on... (gr festy)

Anyway, good job ^^ Wonderful thing, and yes, less angst and more humor would do the job. UPDATE SOON! (^.^)

O.K Say it with me now,'AW'! Update soon!

Sweetest. Chapter. Ever.

I love the idea of Hinata beating sense into Neji. That was the best part for me. See how violent I am? *sigh* Can't even appreciate fluff without some kind of beating involved...

Khazia*~