|Reviews for once upon a september|
| Navaka114 8/13/09 . chapter 3
Please continue! This is such a mean cliffhanger! Awesome job most stories like this are short but thanks for making yours long.
| 0928soubi at docomo.ne.jp 9/21/08 . chapter 3
Dammit, a cliffhanger...Can't wait to see what happens next!
| 0928soubi at docomo.ne.jp 9/21/08 . chapter 1
I've got a little bit of constructive crit, okay?
1) You need to capitalize things! It can be somewhat annoying to the reader for it not to be.
2) When using contractions, like 'didn't,' it should be "n't" not "ent."
Other than that, a well-written fic, and an interesting plot. Good job. .
| kittybella 5/15/07 . chapter 3
Oh, my goddess, I loved it! I'm one of the strange ones with the elircest fetish! And this is just so cute! Please write more!
| Dragon77 4/12/07 . chapter 3
Great chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
| MorganRoxasWhite 4/8/07 . chapter 3
Why must you people torment me with your STUPID cliffhangers!
Very well done! Please update soon!
| MorganRoxasWhite 4/8/07 . chapter 2
| MorganRoxasWhite 4/8/07 . chapter 1
| Consequential Farewell 4/8/07 . chapter 3
It's good so far, but I suggest reBeta-ing the first chapter.
Looking forward to more.
| Sarah-chan91 5/28/06 . chapter 2
I LOVE YOUR STORY!
I think it was great!
Good job. And pleas please please UPDATE SOON!
| rei elizabeth yuy darlian 2/17/06 . chapter 1
hey nice story but if edo is living with Hoho then wouldnt he be edward de lux cuz that's hoho's last name or he decided he prefered his mother?
| Mei Markize 1/14/06 . chapter 2
lovely...when the heck are you going to update? i love this and was up eith mustang? young lady you got some explamnation todo in the next chapters...how come ed doesnt remember Aru...any way you coulkd post this lo livejournal...however i've decided to give a cookie(better said an image) for this lovely work so plz send me your e-mail an i'll sent the cookie ;)
| tenshi 1/10/06 . chapter 2
very good i like you fic!
| Magnificently-In-Love 12/31/05 . chapter 2
this is really cute please keep writing!
| PrettyPickles 12/31/05 . chapter 2
Much Much MUCH better! Well done!