i think the first oneshot was great, but is the two shot like a flashback of something?

I really, REALLY hate the epilogue.. because you made it so heartbreaking, that's why. Please, PLEASE continue this?♥^♥

love it

So very sad. I definitely think Riza _would_ stay with Roy unto death. She's just sick a kickass subordinate.

*wangsty*

It was good, though. Made me sad. *sniffs*

Love this. Hate epilogue. But love it all anyway! ^-^

Nicely written, but did they die?

tis good but I have to... complaint... thingys. first is you should try writing in the past tense... it's much more professional. That and Riza did serve in the war in Ishvar as a snipper. There is proof in the manga and anime to that... solid proof... like no doubt. well... that's all I have to say.

hehe. tis good! XD -huggles Roy movieplush- though I am glad the real ending is a happy one ^_~

You did not just end it like that! It's good please update, amke a sequal, something!

I like these kind of stories. This one was real good! And I like reading stuff with open endings, because I can imagine for myself what happens next. But sometimes I hate it because I want to know the original author's interpretation of it all. Anyway, great job and keep it up!

I liked it :) Nice little cliffie. Don't worry, morbid war stories kick **. ANywyas, it says chapter one, so I'm gonna assume that you're going to update? Please do...It would make my day.

10/10

~Whisper~

even though it was angsty, i really liked it. ^_^ the love and devotion that roy and riza have for each other really shone through here and i thought it was really beautiful and heartwrenching. ^_^

pretty good work. :) keep it up.

I'm not going to cry... I'm not going to cry... damn it.
This is really good. Keep up the writing!

~luffs you for reviewing my stories~ D: I thought they were going to make it out, too. ~sniffle~ Silly me for wanting a happy ending! XD Good job, anyhoo! ^__^

Beautiful as always. The last line, haunting in its simplicity. Keep writing

[God, that review sounded so cliche. Lets just say I like the story and be done with it, alrighty?]